JuliasSneezer

Good day, Cups here to serve a delicious interview! First of all, that opening paragraph was amazing! I could see everything perfectly. You told the scene and actions smoothly, without ...

Good day, Cups her to serve a delicious interview! The opening line captures our attention, because you wonder: "Well why on earth does she have a jar of eyes?" Then ...

Good day, Cups here to serve a delicious interview! First of all, I love your opening paragraph because it's something we can ALL relate to. And you just go: "Hey, ...

Good day, Cups here to serve a delicious review! This was a really good chapter! (Part?) I was enchanted by the descriptions and such, and the characters seem simply enchanting. ...

Good day, Cups here to serve a delicious interview! I actually really love this (section of a) chapter so far! It's super well-written, and you can really tell that you've ...

Good day, Cups here to serve a delicious interview! Warning: this review may seem a slight bit harsh, but please do keep in mind that I'm only trying to help! ...

Good day, Cups here to serve a delicious interview! I actually really like this chapter! The beginning was a slight bit confusing at first, but I was really tripped up ...

Good day, Cups here to serve a delicious interview! I was super excited to see that the next chapter was up. My heart flippin' skipped a beat! You could see ...

Good day, Cups here to serve a delicious review! First of all, if this is actually how you're feeling, I'm super sorry. I'm actually quite feeling the same right now. ...

Good day, Cups here to serve a delicious interview! The introduction caught my attention immediately. I really like the way you basically just get nearly all the information at the ...

Good day! Cups here, to... you know what? You get the basic gist. XD Alright, so the beginning was pretty awesome. You start out with a blunt sentence, which almost ...

Good day, this is Cups, here to serve a delicious interview! This was hilarious! Perhaps if you could have a slight thing ahead of this to relay a bit of ...

Good day, Cups here to serve a delicious review! So, the beginning of the story is a tad bit confusing, which I'm sure you meant to happen so people can ...

Good day, Cups here to serve a delicious interview! This is a pretty good story! I only have a couple of concerns: "Ash could hear the attackers on the wind ...

Good day, Cups here to serve a delicious interview! Well, you've peaked my interest. By like... a lot. I'm super excited to see the next part! I'm a wee bit ...