JoytheBrave

Thanks for commenting, Reet! :) When you say "give more reason" do you mean add a sort of story line or do you just mean add more detail? This was ...

It's a pet peeve of mine, too. I actually wrote this shortly after someone used "no offense" on me once again.

There's nothing here. I think you might have clicked publish without putting anything in.

I get it now. :)

The "don't" was intentional, but it always messed me up too. I finally came up with a way to change it lying in bed last night, so it's fixed now!

Thanks. I'm thinking about adding a few more stanzas. Have any suggestions?

Wow. You are fast.

Thanks for reviewing my poem Dianne.

Thanks Falco! I will try to "look" at your works too.

Thank you for reviewing this. I don't know all the rules for punctuation in poems so you're probably right. I will consider your suggestions and maybe add a few changes ...

Thanks for the review!

Or stolen from Latin. But most English words are.

I want to work with sex-slave victims in third world countries.

Titles are the most difficult part for me. I always struggle with coming up with something not generic for my titles so if you have suggestions let me know. :)

yuggies21, I so badly want to save the hurting. When I get older, I want to go to Africa and be a missionary, maybe change a few lives. But right ...