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Joseph George

  • Poetry » General, General Re: From a distance

    Hey DivergentDemigod, First Impressions: Cute little poem with some upfront value. Not much to review here, so I'll make it simple and short for you. Positives: The positive side of ...

    Nov 20, 2016
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, Dramatic Re: Paradise on Earth

    Hey K4wa, First Impressions: (DISCLAIMER: Obviously I read this as if I was reading the plot outline for a book, which is exactly what this is. I figured that I ...

    Nov 20, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Romantic Re: A Love For Crime- Chapter 1

    Hey SpencerReidIsMyLife, First Impressions: Back to read the second part of your book. As with the previous section, I feel that the story has an interesting enough direction and flow, ...

    Nov 20, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: the old things

    Hey Autumns, First Impressions: Wow, this is a very intense piece of literature. To be honest, at first I thought that it was just another one of those, "I hate ...

    Nov 19, 2016
  • Poetry » Horror, General Re: Spindletop

    Hey TheSilverFox, First Impressions: Definitely not your "kosher" 4x4 poem, so, props for that. I was intrigued by the uniqueness of the layout and the pattern, as well as your ...

    Nov 18, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Romantic Re: A Love For Crime- Prologue

    Hey SpencerReidIsMyLife, First Impressions: To be honest, I'm not quite sure what to think about this one, but it's mostly because it's a prologue, and those are always confusing and ...

    Nov 16, 2016
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: ~Suckers~

    Hey WhosabellCanWrite, First Impressions: Well, interesting little piece. The focus has obviously not been put in the formatting and the grammar of the work, but I like the creepy build ...

    Nov 16, 2016
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Realistic Re: Heart of Man

    Hey stevebayor, First Impressions: Interesting little poem you've got here. Has kind of a pessimistic view on humanity, and a sort of degradation of who we are, which is actually ...

    Nov 16, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: my heart is torn

    Hey Lylas, First Impressions: Well, it definitely classifies as a "Love Poem," no doubt about that. A little bit more on the "bluesy" side, but still classic. This seems like ...

    Nov 15, 2016
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Dream Knitter

    Hey Dracula, First Impressions: Interesting topic that catches the eye, once you've read a few sentences in, as you realize that the title "Dream Knitter" is literal. Sort of threw ...

    Nov 15, 2016


The real voyage of discovery consists not in seeking new landscapes, but in having new eyes.
— Marcel Proust