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Re: Silence
OK first off let me just start by saying there is nothing bad about this poem. It justs needs a bit of work in some areas. In the top section ...
Apr 2, 2012 -
Re: Insanely Mad
Hey mymy! Well um, this isn't how your supposed to post things on YWS. If possible your usually meant to write it out on Microsoft word so you can save ...
Mar 16, 2012 -
Re: The Question
Hey lancemccoy! First of all let me just say straight up that I didn't find this very entertaining or captivating. Your style, in my opinion, is better suited to writing ...
Mar 15, 2012 -
Re: zombies
Hey dpbmn190! OK, so the first thing I noticed here is the punctuation errors. You don't have capital letters after full stops, commas and not enough full stops where needed. ...
Mar 13, 2012 -
Re: Thinking of you.
Hey Amberla! This is great. it sounds Shakespearean and if you made this up yourself I think you have a very bright future. So now for the faults. First off ...
Mar 8, 2012 -
Re: Sick Notes
Hey Joker! I'll be completely honest with you in saying I don't understand what the message is in this poem. The format in which it is sit out is quite ...
Mar 8, 2012 -
Re: Letting go.
Hey Toby! You reviewed one for me so I thought I would return the favor ;). I enjoyed this very much. You used your words very wisely to make the ...
Mar 8, 2012