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Re: The Stallion
Hello Here is a little knight with not much of a sword to review this for you I hope it help some. ;) OK first off it is extremely hard ...
Apr 6, 2013 -
Re: Dear Forgotten Father
Hello here is a Jordin with a review that I hops will help you. :D OK the felling in here was really good because I know how it feels to ...
Apr 3, 2013 -
Re: For You
Hello here I am for a little review that I hope helps you. :) OK you have some really good felling in this here story I like it but the ...
Apr 3, 2013 -
Re: Cityscape (prologue)
Hello Snowmane here I am with a little review that I hope helps you some. :D First off Thoughts about getting to Cityscape was my only comfort on some days, ...
Apr 3, 2013 -
Re: A Question
Hello here is a Jordin with a review that I hope can help. :D OK this here had a very pleasing effect upon me until you used the duct tape. ...
Apr 3, 2013 -
Re: Purpose
Hello Philo here I am for a review that may be a bit to small I hope it helps some. :D OK the way you wrote soul its like soul ...
Apr 3, 2013 -
Re: ~You & Me
Hello welcome YWS it looks like I am the first to review I hope that it helps you. :D Know what is just beginning here It's Just Beginning . :? ...
Apr 2, 2013 -
Re: 58th Street
Hello Cspr her is a jordin with a little review for you I really hope it helps you. :D OK the way you wrote this it is like the story ...
Apr 2, 2013 -
Re: Me: The Beginning
Hello IamOne sense you asked me I will do I hope it helps. :D it sounds a lot better than it does. I think that this is wrong. ;) Another ...
Apr 2, 2013 -
Re: The Economist, I worry about
First off in this here simply kidnapped Eichmann and flew him to Tel Aviv for trial. this does not really make any sense to me but I am sure that ...
Apr 2, 2013 -
Re: The Devil's Dance
Hello Cat here i am for a little review that I hope can help you. :D First off sense your new here I will let you know something if you ...
Apr 2, 2013 -
Re: pillowcase walker
Hello I am here as you can probably guess for a review witch I really hope helps. :D Not sure what you mean by can't see her cry in vain ...
Apr 1, 2013 -
Re: Swan Song
Hello here is a Jordin with a review he hopes will help you out some. He writes to a person with a awesome avatar picture. This is super super good ...
Apr 1, 2013 -
Re: Forgotten chapter 2
First off this thing at the beginning. Main Cast- Actor – Louis Ronald Actress/ mage – Annabeth Collin Louis’s mom – Kerry Ronald Louis’s dad – John Ronald Louis’s best ...
Apr 1, 2013 -
Re: The Narcissus Boutique
What do you mean by out shine her friends. (It was a snowy morning, she walked to Narcissus Boutique) I think is better than (Snowy morning, she walked to Narcissus ...
Apr 1, 2013