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Hello, I just finished reading this poem with my teacher while she was giving a lecture about this website on the overhead projector. And I think you have made a very good clear statement on what is the main reason for writing this wonderful poetry. If I might make a tiny note, you want to balance out the lines when using a short line with a combination of long lines. You want to captivate the reader with a variety of these lines but used in a strategic like pattern. I hope this helps
Okay thanks!
this helps a lot! I'll also keep it in mind for future poems! Strange to here that my poem was projected to your class, wasn't expecting that! hehe thanks again 
Hello , This is Gaurav here to review your work,
First of all, Welcome to This site and society.
Now , Your work is really heart touching . I appreciate it.
Now it comes to criticize ( I'm not good in it though) :-
Sometime lines are a bit longer as compared to the others which can be reduced . It is my personal choice though . I am not quite experienced but what I can say is that the idea behind this work is very Good and I like it.
Choice Of Words Is also nice and I'm amazed to see the flow of words so smoothly and I did not get any spelling mistake.
We hope to see more works in future.
All the best,
keep writing
Hello here is a Jordin with a review he hopes will help you out some.
He writes to a person with a awesome avatar picture.
This is super super good your rimes are really good and so is you spelling and for a person who just got on today you were beyond awesome.
Keep writing and good luck.
Good work I hope it helped some O an i also hope you had a good Easter.
~Jon~
He has done now he is going.
Thanks Jon, I appreciate it!
Hope u had a great Easter too!