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Thankyou! A milenia is one million years. I was thinking of say, "Guide" Guild means to cover with something. Either one would actually work fine. Thanks for the comment! ---Jon--- ...

Thankyou! Music -- Vivacious is a word used to describe someone who is lively and really happy. A eulogy is a speech/words said at a funeral. I'm glad you guys ...

Swooning strolls through meadow parks, Alleyways of mistful darks. In the wake of sister Mary, This her cross she is to carry. This is my favorite stanza of the whole ...

Oh, I've learned something new today! Archaic is it? Cool. That was a really good idea, sorry for not knowing and trying to change it. Well, if it's not a ...

You are going to critique it? That was a wonderful critique, I thought, but, if you want to do better... Thankyou so much!

Thanks, Galerius. I didn't edit it in anyway before I posted it on here like I do my other things. I wanted a piece that could be shredded and then ...

I'm flattered, Chinchila! You made my day, and with some practice you'll be good in no time!

I'll be taking the pink elephant, thanks! You can use that phrase I made up. It's yours, I gave it to you. :D

*Cough* (Went off the page, zero reviews)

:shock: Smaur, I agree with everything said. All I have to say is, wow. I think that was the most amazing critique I've ever gotten. Thank You so much! I'm ...

A big thanks to everyone! I'm glad everyone enjoyed this. June's going to be mad when I tell her how long it took me to write this.XD (Inside Joke) Anyway, ...

Thank you so much. I agree on the plaid thing, I'll definitely change it! Thankyou, ---Jon--- :D

Thank You! I'll definitely fix those things! Much appreciated, ---Jon--- :D

Thankyou Kirsten! What are you talking about! That was a good critique, but, if you want to do a better one, go for it! :lol: Thankyou so much, I'm glad ...

Thankyou Hotaru, you made my day! I agree with everything said, I'll fix some of those things now. A love story? Maybe, I mean, there will be love in it... ...