Jojo

I didn't get what happened in the end. Apart from that, there are a few mistakes that can be put down to construction mistakes as well as typing errors. And ...

To be honest, I was disappointed the way the hero was not even seen properly before we know he is dead. This has got plenty of action. Just a suggestion, ...

The anti-climax was well timed. As it is, it is a feat in itself to have got in a climax and an anti- in such a short space.

Tremendous. It's a life of a girl I would never like to get close with put in a nutshell. I really don't have much to say, the life was so ...

Even if you had not said you were in a rush, I would have got it.

The title's really catchy, isn't it, but I guess it's unfair. Dogs are usually like that, aren't they, jumping from one mate to another

When you recollect your thoughts, can we have a prologue to this. This time about the Aunty who had forgotten how to frown. If you're looking for a more catchy ...

[quote="Incandescence"] I do not know which of us has written this page.[/quote] So, have yo seen the doc.

Even the original ones said it all. The new one's just got more size and professionalism.

Cats and dogs, right! I felt it would be about rain but thought I must have been wrong when the cat-dog physical relations came in. I almost jumped out of ...

I don't get what Griffinkeeper's upto. Where does Snoink come in here? And what's the stuff about llamas and yodelling songs?

Hey, haven't we had the daydream stuff soooooooooooooooo many times??? And Snoink's version does look a lot better.

With tunes, this song itself is good enough to win a Grammy. It sounds like a song with good lyrics. Unfortunately, the tune's not there. You could try setting a ...

Don't forget, this is grammar of a 10-year old. But I agree, grammar's a bit of a letdowner.(What I said just now was bad grammar, wasn't it?) See, I didn't ...

23 children......... Is that normal?????