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[quote="Incandescence"]
I do not know which of us has written this page.[/quote]
So, have yo seen the doc.
I think you actually need to find the door, right about now.
Is this another thing based off Lacan?
Still, I liked it, pretty clever.
so brad is cool.......................right? I was too lazy to read the whole thing but i give it a *round of applause* 10!!!!
I do not know which of us has written this page.
SO THAT WAS APART OF IT!?
See Brad, you did not tell me this when you showed it to me yesterday. Silly sixteen year olds.
Well, having been the third time I read this and after you explained it to me I understand it a lot more. Gosh, I wish I could be written out like that
YES.
Liked it - good references, RLS and Spinoza fit well with what you're trying to say, I think. Excellent use of shifting perpective, so we have trouble telling where 'you' start and 'Brad' leaves off, not surprisingly; last line is a class-A finish.
I'm likin' indeed: perhaps, my only comment is, some people will find it inaccessable because of its tone. That's not really a criticism; just a warning.
wow. Would it be safe to say that you seem to have a form of dissociative identity disorder? no really this was really good. It make zero sense to me...maybe I just didn't analyze it long enough or maybe you're leaving it open to interpretation...