Jojo

Awrite! Get an editor, okay...?! Otherwise, best thing I've read this time in YWS till now.(I'm visiting again after 2 years, i think...heh heh) Style is simple. Story is good. ...

[quote="vox nihili"] Being in the circus would be a lot more interesting than my current occupation, I thought and smiled at my half-joke.[/quote] Filled with a lot of half-jokes, and ...

Allright...well, that was something! Fast pacy script...high school-ey atmosphere. Unfortunately, at the end of it all, felt as if this was a bit cheap. Building up the atmosphere a bit ...

OK, I can get the general sense of it, but I can't make out what the last few lines mean. That's the problem I find with poems--It's very difficult to ...

Wow! What's your friend done to you that you sound so aggrieved. I guess you were so aggrieved that you forgot something existed in this world that starts with a ...

I just read the first 12 pages of 'Men At Arms' of the Discworld Series and felt that he is one of the most capable humorous authors of all time. ...

How come almost everyone has not really liked the book. To me, it honestly was a pulse racing read. It's so exciting I couldn't keep the book when I was ...

It was painful to have my favourite sport described thus. :shock: I know the next time I'll watch a football match I'll be thinking about your poem at the same ...

Another great limerick. But what's with the 'butt'? Was it a :oops: , or was it a deliberate mistake :lol: ?

Whew! The guardian of all oinking beings in a rare attempt to write serious. Maybe you should warn readers in the topic that it's serious. Otherwise people may come in ...

Thought I would point out some mistakes. [quote] saw a man in his forties with a black beared[quote] [quote]punched himin the gut.[/quote] In the beginning, it was exciting but there ...

It is an exciting read. I have to agree with xanthan gum though. It seems like the first line came to ur mind and you decided to write a poem. ...

You started like you want to do a 'Sidney Sheldon'. The way you've started, I think this'll be a sure bestseller. But whether it shall be good, I cannot say ...

Isn't there any more about the school and last day at school. I could strongly feel the feelings of FREEDOM and NO MORE... Now, that I'll be 15 soon enough ...

What is line 212 of Act 1 Scene ii? I just don't feel like :- 1)searching for my book 2)Searching for the Act 3) '' '' '' Scene 4) '' ...