Hi @Snoink I'm back again with another short review for you. So lets jump right into this shell we.
Look at me!
Or perhaps not…
For I know I hate you
Yet strangely enough
When I see you
My strings get pulled
And I begin to hate myself
I am the puppet…
You are the master.
This is a great poem I can feel a lot of a emotion coming out of this one. It's like you put year heart down on to the peace of paper. Also again very easy to read, with they way you laid the poem out. I must say I do agree with @ Jojo a bit about the ratting. I think it could do with maybe being ratted 12 just because it is a very heart felt poem and some people may get very sad, just saying it might need it doesn't mean you have to do it. Ether way I am feeling quite sorry for this puppet. I also feel sorry for all my teddies that I used to play with and draw on when I was little. This is like toy story all over again!
Anyway or another it was a great poem.
So that all that I can say, sorry if I hurt your feelings with what I said, I really didn't mean to at all. <33 I think I sore the name of this and I was like, hey don't I have a song that I wrote that is called that? Witch I do I just haven't posted it.
I hope you have a great day/night witch ever side of the world your on.
@Dossereana Flying Over The Green Room And Spreading Shards Of Encouragement