Published March 11, 2006
friends they can be loving, careing,and nicebut the other times they can back stab you talk about you behind your backbut yet you can't forget what they have done you still forgive
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JOSH!!! put sum effort inta this mahan! its got potentil
right. read a lot or apply some spell and grammer checks. for example:
still, after this, it isn't all that encapturing. try to apply some poetic language, rhythm, metaphors, similies - anything!
Wow! What's your friend done to you that you sound so aggrieved. I guess you were so aggrieved that you forgot something existed in this world that starts with a 'p' and ends with a 'n' and has got 11 letters.
Yeeeees, it's punctuation. Great going. Now, if you'd please insert those vital things in their positions and making it readable I'll consider reading it.
i hope this is rough.
no commas or fullstops so i was out of breath while reading it, spelling mistakes and no paragraphing.
but, i am guessing this was extremley rushed...