JohnLocke1

Hello, my friend. First, I am quite inexperienced at reviewing poetry. However, I saw the word "dryad," and I was immediately drawn in. All the young knights spent perchance, fighting ...

Hello, my friend. First, as a warning to all whose poetry I attempt to review, I am quite inexperienced at all things poetry. I'm not @Hannah, after all. And a ...

Hello, my friend. First, I must say that I am honestly impressed. I thought that the structure of this novel resembles that of an epic poem. It intrigued me. I ...

Hello, my friend. First, I do not usually review poetry. I am quite inept at it, so forgive me if I write something ludicrous or completely unhelpful. Coming to a ...

Hello, my friend. First, I'm glad that you've finished the second chapter. I am certainly sticking with this novel through the very end. Second, some grammatical things: Ashley’s twig-like body ...

Hello, my friend. First, I do not read fan-fiction. Simply a warning in case I give a suggestion that does not fit with a fan-fiction writer's mind or something along ...

Hello, my friend. First, any story that is true and from the heart can be overwhelming effective and powerful. When writing of personal events, we, as writers, tend to become ...

Hello, my friend. First, I think you can do a lot with this. Even though this is a short story, you have set it up in a way that I ...

Hello, my friend. First, as I say to all who use it, I commend you for your ability to write in the present. An ability that I certainly do not ...

Hello, my friend. First, since the reviewer below handled the specific grammar, I will jump straight into what I thought. It did all seem unrealistic. First, the dialogue seemed forced. ...

Hello, my friend. First, let me say that I find your writing natural and flowing. I usually reprimand writers when I believe that their sentences are too bulky or, I ...

Hello, my friend. First, I quite enjoy your writing. It is witty, quick, and interesting to read. You have started a story that I would definitely want to finish. I ...

Hello, my friend. First, intriguing start. You have already established a mystery... I am always enthralled by a good mystery! As you said to the reviewer below, you will be ...

Hello, my friend. First, this is only the intro, so I will reserve this review to simply tell you my thoughts at this point. The key to a perfect intro ...

Hello, my friend. First, let me say that I adore the French. I adore French history, I speak the language, I am listening to Edith Piaf sing "La vie en ...