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Hello Santana, I've read your introduction and I find the idea very interesting and I think it could develope into a very interesting story. I do have some objections, more ...

Hello Catnip, I'm here to give you my opinion and I hope that you won't mind me being a little more critical that my previous fellow reviewers. First I must ...

You story is very well written and extremely powerful when it comes to transmitting feelings. You managed to convert here terror and her remorse in such a way that it ...

Hello SushiSashima, I must say that I love your story, mostly because I am a fan of the gender myself. You really have a natural talent at creating mystery. I ...

Hello Anmarie, one review from me. As Tabithalillian focused a lot on the storytelling I'm not going to do the same and instead talk about the characters. But first I ...

I think this is a nice ending although again it could be developed a bit more. Nate's reaction is predictable and that is good because it adds to the realism. ...

This is the part that I like most because Nate gets what he deserves at last. Again be careful that there are some linked words. However there are some problems ...

Now to part two, In the first paragraph, just at the end of the first sentence, I think it comes "guess by whom". Also, Andy is destroying a bit his ...

Hello winterbites, I had read all the chapters of you story and now I will try to say something about each one of them. I like the way Andy introduces ...

Hello unitiger14, First of all welcome to YWS. I hope you will have a great time here. So here is my review, I hope it will help you. A general ...

Hello Natural Militia, First I want to say that managed to write a great story, a very disturbing one but otherwise great. I appreciate the main idea you chose for ...