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Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!!
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My first memories were of an orphanage in Nasinu, Valkresys, a city hidden within a city called Tsung Tsu, but I was born in Crystal City, Northern Province, Syri. I spent some of the days watching the other kids leave with their new parents. Most of the days were spent staring at what laid outside the small cities.
Okay, well as the start to an introduction goes, this looks to be one of the sadder ones I've run into, we see that our protagonist is an often that's watching probably with a tinge of sadness as other kids get to leave with foster parents while this person appears to get left behind here. The talk of things that lie in the small cities is a nice bit of background there to establish the location here. Solid looking start so far.
My dreams of being adopted were never fulfilled, but that doesn't mean I never left the orphanage. I was taken away by a man named Gabriel. It turns out that he was sent to recruit me into the Heavenly Forces. I met my friends-Enoch Nobuyashi; son of Cain, Lucifel Kyshimoto; fourth son of Satan, and Armaros; a sweet yet mysterious Semoran who had seen no justice in Old Gaia-in Second Heaven. They had also been chosen as warriors in the Forces.
Well, that went from sad day at an orphanage and just very normal sounding mortal things, to absolutely crazy heavenly forces and all sorts of really cool sounding stuff just out of completely nowhere and well I am not complaining at all cause it is quite cool here. It seems like a pretty awesome premise here to have these folks show up all to be fighting together in some kind of heavenly special forces sort of situation here.
I went through my training thinking all of my problems were dissolved, blind to the true reason why we were training.
Well, that ends off on a bit of a grim note there, it looks like whatever these folks were training for, it wasn't a particularly good thing, with that very ominous statement of how this person thinks all their problems are behind them but in reality things aren't as they seem. Well, a pretty intriguing piece you've got here. It does seem like a story that I would read here.
Aaaaand that's it for this one.
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Harry
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