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Re: You think you want to be a writer? No you don't.
Wow you might want to have a nice big cup of tea and calm down. Better now? Good. It was a good piece, great some might say but you do ...
Sep 2, 2013 -
Re: In the Mind of a Loon
Hello it is joe Ahhhh... review day is almost over and this is only my second review. Oh well, it did start around 9 o'clock for me. Anyway down to ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: I need to write.
Hello it is joe My first review of the day, its a bit late but never too late to start. Anyway great story-poem hybrid. Captures perfectly how I feel when ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: Flawed
Hellllllooooooooooooo its jooooooooooooooooooe. Awesome poem, I love the first paragraph "Face me with my flaws and tell me you see me for who I really am. Can you not see ...
Aug 24, 2013 -
Re: The melancholy
Helloooooooo its Joooooooooooe Great poem lovely in fact. I really like this part "Waiting for another year, Without shedding another tear. Singing the melancholy to myself, Awaiting the next day ...
Aug 13, 2013 -
Re: A Night to Remember - Chapter 1
Helloooooooo Its Jooooooooooe to review your story. I love the first two sentences "When you’re young, you dream. You think that the world will be this amazing place that you’re ...
Aug 13, 2013 -
Re: Perfectly Content
Hey its joe here. I like story, love it in fact. To me you really capture the essence of writing very well. The whole story fells like I'm siting down ...
Aug 13, 2013 -
Re: Fly
I really liked this piece. I thought the emotion was just fine, great actually. Something I don't understand is who's talking to the M.C. ( Main Character). Is it the ...
Aug 13, 2013 -
Re: Letters to the Merciless
Great poem. I like the first paragraph the best "Dear Loneliness, You are my only companion nowadays. They say it’s only a phase but it never passes, They all say ...
Aug 12, 2013 -
Re: My Yellow Bird
Great poem I love the emotion and the word choice. I don't usually read romantic poems but this one was different. Its the perfect length and flow. I don't really ...
Aug 12, 2013 -
Re: quiet demolitionist
I like this poem. It has a nice flow and great descriptions. If I had to point out something wrong with this poem it would be the paragraph beginning with ...
Aug 12, 2013 -
Re: Savior
I never read romantic stories. I just don't like em but this one was different, kinda dark too. First of all I just want to say that its almost all ...
Aug 12, 2013
