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Re: Ideal illusion
Hey BlackCrow It's Joe here to the reviewing rescue! (First let me start with a question. Are you a simpsons fan cuz I love them! If you go to my ...
Apr 16, 2015 -
Re: Black Eyes Book 1: The Seventh Spirit: Chapter 1: Odd Dream
Hello it's Joe to the reviewing rescue. Firstly welcome to the Young Writers society! I hope you find this website as fun and resourceful as I have. Okay, so the ...
Mar 6, 2014 -
Re: Black Flames - Chapter 1
Hello it's Joe to the reviewing rescue Holly moly macaroni and cheese this is Brilliant! This writing is magnificent especially for someone as young as yourself (I'm only a year ...
Jan 30, 2014 -
Re: Why I believe in God.
Hello it's joe to the reviewing rescue Yikes no wonder this sparked so much controversy. Ok just to start I'm a christian so this isn't like I'm saying there's no ...
Jan 28, 2014 -
Re: Writing
Hello It's Joe for team ROUGE, yeah! First off YES finally red has caught up to blue. WE CAN DO THIS. Great poem, short and easy to read and just ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: Dying Embers
Hello its Joe to rescue Team Red Just when all seemed lost, the sun setting on another lost review day, a cry of help in the rubble of the rouge ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: Sailboats in the Sky
Hello it's Joe coming to the review rescue First off Welcome to YWS I hope you like this site as much as I do. If you need any help just ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: Me (for lack of a better title)
Hello it's Joe Smoe to the reviewing rescue. Hello there changetheworld (did you're parents not love you?) I am following up on the link you put on the rouge team ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: The Assassin- Part 3
Okay here we go Hello it's Joe here to save team red! So first of all great story as I've said three times so far today. First off I think ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: The Assassin- Part Two
Hello Its Joe to review the second part of your story. Great chapter, and it ends in an even bigger cliffhanger than the last chapter. I don't usually look for ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: The thing about dying.
Hello its joe to the reviewing rescue Wow! That was heavy but really really good. I saw the bucket list too and I thought it was really good. Anyway great ...
Sep 28, 2013 -
Re: The Assassin
Hello its Joe here to review your story. Great, Absolutely, Completely Awesmazing. That's really all there is too say. It just can't get any better so I'll say my favourite ...
Sep 27, 2013 -
Re: Untitled Work 4
Hello its Joe here to review your poem First off great idea I too wrote something about child labour a little while ago for school (it was a short story ...
Sep 26, 2013 -
Re: The Beast
Hello its Joe to the reviewing rescue. Great poem defyingravity01 errr if that's your name (I suppose it would be rather unfortunate if that was your real name) Anyway awesome ...
Sep 20, 2013 -
Re: Think Like A Dude
Hello its joe Just something I thought you should know before I review. I never read romantic stories. Ever. But this one was different, kind of funny in a quirky ...
Sep 7, 2013
