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Hola, Fand of the Locks; Fandilocks; Fandy-fand! They're all good. :wink: So I'm going to be honest with you. I loved this. It was fantastically well written, but I had ...

The man in front of him shared the same facial expression small nitpick but no one ever has the 'same' facial expression. Similar, I think, works better. a deep, damnable ...

I enjoyed this series heaps, but that was a good long time ago now. There's going to be a movie? That's awesome news. The Demonata was pretty damn good too, ...

I'm really beginning to enjoy this. I think you're starting to nail her voice, now. The sun was about to rise, and I obviously couldn’t leave in broad daylight. There ...

Well there isn't much to work with here, now is there? I suggest you inject some grammar and proper punctuation though; the absence of it does nothing for this piece. ...

Hello and welcome to YWS. I think this story was, for the most part, well written, so kudos on the good writing. Having said that, it came to naught. This ...

Well, as most of the nitpicking has already been done, I'll keep this brief and general. I found the character hard to engage with. This has to do, in part, ...

Hello Jenna! Welcome back. If, only given the option to remove one breed [s]I was forced to choose[/s], it would not take me more than an instant to decide upon ...

Sorry about that small today, ha, the gym was closing soon so I had to go and snatch a quick workout. warm smoke genie pours down my throat genie smoke? ...

Okay, so I'll say from the outset that I didn't enjoy this. First off, grammar, spelling and punctuation are of paramount important in any piece of literature, fiction or otherwise, ...

Hello, and good morrow! I shall be your reviewer today. XD It was then when I looked into the mirror And saw that I was dead For the first time. ...

Well, this was pointless. Short and to the point yes, but...there was no point. What's more, all you did was tell us what happens. You didn't show us anything; we ...

First off, Welcome to YWS. You should know that we have a 2:1 ratio of reviews for every post you make, so please make sure to review other people's stuff. ...

I liked this. I think. I understood the story but at times I was confused. It read well and easily, which is good but I failed to understand the significance ...

I think, at the core of this, you have a good idea; to explore the dichotomy between thought and action, word and deed but the execution is poor. This is ...