JesusLvr18

Wow. Just wow. This is amazing! Truely, it is! I love your voice in this story! I'd compare it to the great Lewis Carroll (Alice in Wonderland, Through The Looking-Glass) ...

This is really good! I always love poems about rain/storms/etc. and this one was one of the best i've read on this site! My favorite stanza is: Smiling is my ...

Good song! I'd like to hear the tune! I compose myself, and write poetry/songs, but they never seem to fit together. Just judging from the tune I had in my ...

This is a very interesting and unique poem! Maybe I don't read the right poetry, but this is the first make-up poem I've ever read! Although I love all the ...

Beautiful poem! As Meshugenah says, I like the first stanza the best! You really capture the 'Be A Kid Forever' feel which more people need. My least favorite stanza was ...

Ugh, I forgot to click the review button! This is the same as the other one I posted, just a review. Amazing poem! I always love positive poems, as they ...

THIS IS AMAZING!!! At first, I will admit, I pictured the Lucky Charms Leprechaun. But, don't worry, that image did not stick! By the middle of the poem, I realized ...

This is a very unique poem. It really works well in our society today, what with all the anti-bullying campaigning going on. The voice works very well for the subject ...

Ummmmmmm... that is very interesting...

Hey! I finally found one of your poems! Right then, onto the reviewing! I really like this poem. Although on the surface the poem is clearly about a mother bird ...