Jenthura

Hmm, this is something to think about. While I agree with your views, I don’t think you portrayed them in the best way possible. From my point of view, everything ...

Here be mine review! Legend has it that long ago , Paul was a lost spirit of the Internet, and not the amazing, animated yellow thing we all love today. ...

Saving a spot. I'll work on this one offline. :D It was funny to read, and it was a good idea, albeit a clichéd one. My nitpicks and revision are ...

Was this a submission to canislupis' contest? If so, you did an amazing job. I won't go looking for nitpicks, but I did see a few things wrong with this ...

Hey, I haven't got a review for this (I suck at reviewing poetry), but I do want to link you to this contest: Click here . It's all about rocks ...

This is odd, I don't normally critique poetry. Oh well! :D Oh, nothing rhymes with purple, Lament, for it is true, Who indeed would take the time, to rhyme, With ...

Hey there,! I’m glad I found this, it looks excellent. First things first, a nitpick list. Our tiny village lay in between the barren moors and the clusters of farmland ...

Hey, FC! Although this is sad, I must say I enjoyed it. Your style of poetry here seems to be freelance-ish, but in truth there are a few places that ...

This chapter captured me for the suddenness with which Zayn is plunged in and out of serenity. He is buried in the deepest heart of comfort and relief, and then ...

Hi Beil, It’s me again! I noticed quite a few errors, maybe a few that have already been pointed out, but who cares, right? :D The cattle had frozen to ...

I liked this chapter for the soft aura it has of Louis’ love. I can understand that he has conflicting emotions between what he is and what he knows Violet ...

Hey there, Dianne. This piece reminds me the most of Donnie Darko, ever seen it? I Thought of it mostly because a tragedy occurs to the MC, one they saw ...

Awesome! Very compelling and gripping, your description of his pain and dismal situation. I like how you’ve hinted at so many things, yet really told us nothing at all except ...

His leading men seem quaint and gay Is this a play on words? Because it's a well-known fact that the women in Shakespeare's plays were really men (or boys). Wikipedia ...

Alright, Z, first things first. The user who reviewed your first chapter was Jash , not me. Jash and I are friends, but you were mistaken to give me the ...