Jennya

Sorry but the spacing did not show up :( there is meant to be a line break before "Shoes" "Shoes" and "And shoes".

Great first attempt, nice narrative story telling feel and mood. I don't know a lot about poetry but something tells me this needs a little more structure and I guess ...

Nice, once of the better love poems I've read for a while. I like the enjambment, really gives an nice rhythm and flow, the poem really just slides of the ...

I realized I posted twice :/

Nice, I agree with the other reviews the simplicity and the meaning of this poem are quite neat. You have described quite nicely the topic. Your poem is very relate-able ...

I love this, short and sweet. Captures a great moment. Watch the 'I', sorry for the short review.

Nice, this is very much a poem. Is your church being mean to you? People can be so judgmental. Anyway this is a very good poem! keep writing ( unlike ...

I like that line, full of emotion, can't really place it any other way.

Wow, this is not just poetry it's art. Wow, again... ( lousy review)

I loved this! it reminded me of so many people I know. Defiantly keep writing!

Great poem, in general I agree with what others have said. it's very calming and easy to the eye. Great work!

Lovely, very funny! the end was very cute. I assume she became vampire afterward, like the whiny cow from Twilight. Great fun to read!

Yes, 5 meters per second is very fast for a trolley, not that i think about it. But then again in physics class me have to simplify things to make ...

I like it. I really don't have much to say except you use ... to much.

I laughed when I read all of theses stories. The one about the gifts was my favorite.I love how you joined seemingly random objects and things and managed to tie ...