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Jennya

  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Untitled 2

    Nice, but a little long and depressing but i have a feeling that is what you where aiming for. I really don't like poems about self harm , they put ...

    Apr 15, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: If I were a leather jacket.

    Wow, I love this quite original and very fun but then again you have a nice message in it. I'm no expert on poetry even though I do write a ...

    Apr 11, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Daughter of the Underworld-Prologue and First chapter(Draft)

    Nice, I really am not in the mood for any serious review but I am a classical history nut, having studied it in school and I must admit that this ...

    Apr 9, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Where the Wind Blows

    Nice, I realized it was about your lost kingdom character. Really a great way to tell us more about your character. On it's own it was an excellent story, I ...

    Apr 8, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Loner.

    Nice, like the person above me said there are some spelling and expression issues. But it's a great poem, i too feel like i can relate to it. Stanzas would ...

    Apr 7, 2011
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: Left Behind At NCIS

    I'm no expert but i really liked this. You got the personalities and the many nuances of the character right. It was like they could have actually said that. This ...

    Mar 27, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Bloody Bride

    Nice, it actually would make a great short story but does not mean it's not a good poem. Personally i'm no poetry expert, i just write it, so take what ...

    Mar 23, 2011
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: deleted

    Good day young physicist ( that's what my physics teacher would say anyway)... Anyway, nice article you have here good way to think about newton's law. I wish i had ...

    Mar 23, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Angel's Cry

    Nice, a very sweet little poem. As i don't know that much about poetry myself i will make this one quick! In general it's a decent poem but the rhythm ...

    Mar 21, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Animosity

    Nice, the review above mine was quite good. Your first stanza was quite amazing, i really liked it. Your second stanza was also very strong but like the person above ...

    Mar 21, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Christianity ( In a Nut Shell)

    Hey, it's brave of you to do something controversial. In general it was quite nice but i felt that the lines where to long, and because of that the rhyming ...

    Mar 18, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Innocence of a Demon: Chapter One Blood

    Hey, Nice, a little long but good never the less. I like the intro, very nice. Personally, i don't like daemon angel books. They are to ' teen fiction' like, ...

    Mar 17, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Clean

    This review will be lousy. Nice, a great free form poem. Easy to read and full of messages, this is my type of poetry. The whole thing is like one ...

    Mar 15, 2011
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: nonsense

    You should really make this into a poem. I quite like the use of your short and sharp sentences. Very fast paced, although more paragraphs would be nice. It's good ...

    Mar 14, 2011
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Pakistan: Love it or Leave it

    Nice but this is really strange to me. At my school the use of ' I ' is strictly forbidden unless it is an opinion piece. Please tell me what ...

    Mar 14, 2011


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