Jennafina

Pingu, I'm going to lock this for now so an empty thread doesn't keep getting revived, but if there was a reason you were keeping it unlocked just delete my ...

Hey, Conrad. :) This was a really interesting piece. As I was reading it, I kept agreeing with Juliana's thoughts. I like how even though it's short, you've created a ...

Hey, Kayla! Thanks for the link to this. You need to capitalize all of the I's. Whenever you say "I did this" or "she and I did that" it needs ...

Hey, Spike! Thanks a lot for the critique on my story. It was really helpful and I will definitely be making changes because of what you pointed out. Life, such ...

Hey, Tiff! As always, I love your work. It's beautiful, and seems so natural like it's meant to be read out loud. I do think it needs stanzas though (I ...

Hey, Gothic Butterfly. I'm Jenna, and I will be your reviewer for today. I read chapter six, enjoyed it but didn't know exactly what was going on, and so I ...

First, there are some very important grammar changes that you should make to make this poem readable. Change all the u's to you, capitalize the I's, put an apostrophe in ...

I'm not exactly sure what you were going for with this, so I'm also not sure if you achieved it. I see you've posted it in the fiction sections though... ...

Glitter Hey, JP. Thank you so much for your critique on my story. I thought I'd return the favor. :) “You first.” She said coyly.  "You first," she said, coyly. ...

I really like the idea of a 55 word story. I'm sure it forced you to think outside the box, if you'll pardon the cliché, and that's always a good ...

I am but the remaining pulp of a beaten, abused, abandoned, starving girl. Forgive me for being harsh, but I don't like it. Your first sentence sounds like the start ...

Hello, Emoticon! Thanks for posting your lyrics. Which instrument do you play? I noticed a few punctuation errors in your song. Writing lyrics is like writing poetry, format wise-- it's ...

Hey, Kamas! Thanks for the link to this. All of these art inspired poems are awesome. The format seemed a bit bunched up, and crowded. I think it could be ...

Traditionally, words in the title of a poem are capitalized, so it would be "On Hardwood Floors." I like the title a lot, by the way. Something else I really ...

I love how you wrote a story about a famous painting. That's a really cool idea. Normally I'd tell you to punctuate it, but I like it without capitalization. It ...