JeffRWoodridge

Thank you for reading, I'm ecstatic you enjoyed it!

Thank you very much for your criticism! I agree the third line is hesitating so I put it as I see fit. As far as the consistency of syllables I ...

Your criticism is welcome and I'm glad you enjoyed it, but I was hoping you could explain on the problem you saw in the 2nd stanza third line. Removing "the" ...

1) The city many times before is mentioned as corrupt. 2) The father was studying maps. 3) Guards were at his door when he left. 4) he carried no weapon. ...

I am very glad you liked this poem, and I did leave a little edit for the third line in the first stanza, beguiled is a much better rhyme than ...

I'm glad you liked this poem, and thank you very much for pointing out the typo, I forgot to add in a coma.

Oh, that part makes a lot more sense now. I apologize, I should have thoroughly examined it before I counted it negatively.

Thank you for your kind words! I am extremely glad you were able to find some peace and answers in my poem and I hope dearly you find joy wherever ...

Thanks for the review! I'm glad it brought you back to childhood memories, and double thanks for pointing out the typo, I'll be sure to fix it ASAP!

I'm glad you accepted the feedback, as far as the pretty pictures part, if you completely removed it the piece overall and the direction of the Q&A would not be ...

Thanks, I'll be sure to keep your advice to heart in my future works!

Thank you very much for your advice!

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Hi Anshira, this poem is delightful to read! I'm certain anyone who reads can relate to at least one of the stanzas as you did a great job with variety ...

Thanks man!

Thanks! The title actually came from a song No Honor in Blood, everything else is 100% original though. By the way nice profile pic!