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Re: little deaths (or 'for want of mutual suicide pacts')
how sad. this is a very short piece. Great wow words but there is absolutely no punctuation. You describe the setting really well. If i were to rate this between ...
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Re: The Adventures of Death and Plague (hidden scene)
wow this is a really long story. Great punctuation and wow words. I would watch your languid at the end. and if i were to rait it between a 1-10 ...
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Re: The Adventures of Death and Plague (hidden scene)
wow this is a really long story. Great punctuation and wow words. I would watch your languid at the end. and if i were to rait it between a 1-10 ...
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Re: Temptation
gross amazing fantastic and gross. Great description. You really built the setting up well. i don't even know half of the words you use and that is good thing. keep ...
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Re: Temptation
gross amazing fantastic and gross. Great description. You really built the setting up well. i don't even know half of the words you use and that is good thing. keep ...
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Re: Waiting In the Storm
first of all great name. second great poem. It fits exactly with what i am learning about in class. I don't think it should be poem i think you should ...
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Re: Rotting Tombs
Wow you are the best writer. I really loved your extensive vocabulary. And the format if the story. It really makes the reader want to read more. My favorite part ...
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Re: Big Black Wall
Wow that is depressing but fastenating. The description you use is fabulous. It feels like you have really gotten into it and really now what it is like. I love ...
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Re: Prologue - The Immortal's Assassin
This is very great story you use lots of puntiaron and it makes me want to read more. The disc reception is my favorite part. One thing I think you ...
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Re: Goldilocks 1
That is one of the best pieces I have read
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Re: catching clues
Please review this
Nov 10, 2012