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JayeCShore

JayeCShore

  • Poetry » General, General Re: Red Roses/Black Roses

    Hi, J.C. here for a review! Well, I must say, if you are one to enjoy cryptic language, this surely fits the bill. Personally, I'm not so keen on the ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Realistic Re: You Know You're A Writer When

    Hi, J.C. here for a review! I found myself laughing when I hit the end, because it's so true. I don't text much, but this applies to so many other ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: tick tick tick

    Hi, J.C. here for a review! I've always like whimsical poems with blurred messages for interpretation, so this one was great. I have to say I will be a bit ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Dear Disney

    Hi, J.C. here for a review! Well, you definitely hit the nail on the head with this one. But, I'm not sure you used the right hammer, and you may ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Culture Re: Gay

    Hi, J.C. here for a review! Before I begin I have to say that I believe those who choose to be gay have made a bad, and wrong choice. My ...

    May 6, 2014
  • Poetry » Satire, Realistic Re: Pretty Face

    Hey Lucy! J.C. here for a review! Wow! Wait, let me say it again.... Wow! Okay, now that I'm done trying to figure out if I should be laughing hysterically ...

    May 1, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Vows For Marrying the Earth

    Hi, J.C. here for a review! It seems like I've said this several times in the last few days, but, this was definitely a breath of fresh air. I feel ...

    May 1, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: gelatin heart

    Hi, J.C. here for a review! To begin with, I've always loved cryptic language, mostly because it's mysterious and you can get so much out of just one line. While ...

    May 1, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Mystery / Suspense Re: deleted

    Hi, J.C. here for a review! What are you supposed to do when you’re pretty sure you’re being stalked by a possibly dangerous wolf-girl and a possibly dangerous man in ...

    May 1, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Tales of the Argonauts: the Osorezu and the Hana (Chapter 5-2)

    Hi, J.C. here for a review as promised! I agree with chancesnchanges below, the imagery you use is fascinating. I wouldn't go as far as saying something such as breathtaking, ...

    May 1, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Lonely

    Hi, J.C. here for a review, as promised! First off, I have to tell you that I tend to shy away from anything 18+, because it goes against my morals, ...

    Apr 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Escape From Rainbowland Chapter 1

    Hi, J.C. here for another review! First of all I must congratulate you that this is not a book, thus far, about children saving the world. I can't stand these ...

    Apr 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Escape From Rainbowland Chapter 5

    Hi, J.C. here for a review! My first impression of this came from the title, so I was expecting something a bit young and childish. I was quite surprised when ...

    Apr 30, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, Humor Re: Banana Peels

    Hi, J.C. here for a review! I must say, I was very impressed. I honestly did not find anything funny in this poem, except for the fact that you had ...

    Apr 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Silver Soul: Chapter Two [Part 1 (ReWrite)]

    Hi, J.C. here for a review! To begin, I want to tell you that I'm in the mood for a more critical review, so don't worry if it sounds like ...

    Apr 29, 2014


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