JayBlu

This one had a particular interest from me seeing as I have contemplated suicide more than once in the past, though not in years. Times were darker back then. I've ...

Will have to explain to me what the song of the swan is, unless that's just a vague reference to something else and of no real importance. Millions of memories ...

It seems to be heavily implied that the shadow in a much more darker source of Squirrel as in evil. Or maybe that's what you are trying to portray. Yet ...

Okay then first off I just had one question? Since you only mentioned this name once, I was unsure but was the man's name identified as Squirrel? If so, you ...

I feel like this is going to be one of those Disney-style fantasy plots with the utmost good battling the utmost evil in multiple skirmishes that build into full blown ...

Never could quite comprehend the exact detail you were trying to convey in your writing. I always got pieces of information here and there, and maybe this is because they ...

Everybody is supposedly finding humor in this...but I guess I missed it somewhere since this seems more tragic to me than anything else. Either that, or my sarcastic style of ...

Who is Warren? That name just came in randomly. I noticed Ford and then Charles, but who is Warren? This immortal you speak of....that's awesome!! I gotta say, this story ...

This was....damn. Baelrom, I couldn't say he was pompous or anything like that. Not really. Nothing about his manner or even speech suggested being overly arrogant in nature. Yes, considering ...

Damn. I can't imagine having one sort of life, so joyous and entirely perfect, damn near paradise in nature like what Maggie once had. then to have it all end ...

"Whoever taught you of neckties and dark fools?", woah. That one line there has enough imagery to have my mind wandering elsewhere to wise and experienced veterans of a shadow ...

So it's more or less back to the way it was between the two before Maggie left for the Capitol. Well, only between them at least, which I suppose is ...

This was actually interesting. I dont read much lyrics or poetry. But I suppose this grabbed me more-so then most considering it's either right up my alley or rather along ...

As I've said before dont look to me for grammar :/ Anyways I like COBALT and he has the future telling...and I like Eriks despite he's somewhat of a dick ...

Tragic and sort of vicious creation of a chapter you have here and I gotta say I love it lol. I'm not big with grammar nor do I pretend to ...