JasperSkye

This story made me a good way, of course. You see, my father left when I was very young, so I never really got to know him so reading this ...

Hmm...I'm not quite sure how to review this poem. I adore it, that's for sure but other than that...I don't really have any other comments about it. Well, I mean...I ...

I actually enjoyed reading this poem. It was all so very unique from the formatting of the poem itself to the word choice you chose. Over all, I think you ...

Wow. You did a really...like REALLY good job with this poem. If this is what has happened to you in real life then Bless your Sould. I will be praying ...

At first I wasn't sure exactly how I felt about this poem and then I realized that I actually quite like it. Although a few people say that you should ...

Very well written. Your poem seemed to kind of speak to me, but not exactly. You know? It was the fact that it was so truthful that really seemed to ...

Wow. Beautifully written. You really captured the emotion in this poem. Very very very amazing!! I love it.

oh my...wow. this short story...it's incredible. it's also very sad. i broke down crying at the end when it said : "Dad?" "Yes? "I love you." "I know. Go outside ...

i really liked this poem. the imagine it painted in my mind was...different ? in a good way. i imagined the old train just sitting there on the tracks for ...

"How busy and scary life can be, and that you will get nowhere without facing your fears." This is what you told me the meaning behind this poem of yours ...

Anthony, I love you. This is...wow. I'm in tears right now. x) God...Anyways, thank you. Hahaha. I'm glad I got you to read my story, otherwise you would have never ...

I really liked it. Especially the dialouge between the "narrator" and the sun. Very good. I felt it had a second meaning as well. As though the sun wasn't really ...

It was precious, indeed. Very very cute and innocent. Filled with life, for sure. You actually have really good rhyming (spelled that wrong probably. its late. i could care less ...

I am a big Harry Potter fan and this just made my entire WEEK! I loved it. It tied everything together rather well. I am also a big fan of...YOU. ...

earlier your sister posted this and i'm so very glad to see that you made an account here. anyways, this is exactly what i said earlier when she posted it ...