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Re: The feeling
Good poem. Just a bit of questions. I Don't write poems, so I could be wrong about correct capitalization. If you do capitalize each word at the beginning of a ...
Oct 20, 2014 -
Re: No Name
*claps* That's not sarcasm, I'm clapping because this is REALLY good! Just a couple of suggestions/errors: Line 2-3.) either put a comma after "could" on line 2 or remove "but" ...
Oct 19, 2014 -
Re: Immortality
Great poem, so true. Just a couple of suggestions and errors I found: Errors: Line 2.) "time will come" (put semicolon here rather than comma) "we live to die" Line ...
Oct 19, 2014 -
Re: My Facade Broken
Good poem, but I have a few suggestions and fixes. Line 2: There is an "e" at the end of the word therefore. Line 2: put a semicolon at the ...
Oct 16, 2014 -
Re: Pokemon Ultimate Evolution: Who's That Pokemon? - Vivid Colourless
Just a couple of comments and questions: 1.) Unknown species is dramatic and all, but he has to be a sort of Pokemon doesn't he? It would be cool if ...
Oct 16, 2014 -
Re: Broken
The story was great. Full of emotion and imagery. The metaphors work, as does the contrast between reality and imagination. It is really immersive, and it's like you see what ...
Oct 16, 2014