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Jashael

Jashael

  • Other » General, General Re: An addiction - Young Writers' Society.

    Hey, Justtrying! Jash here for a very quick review. Some nitpicks: "Which sites do you find addictive, other than facebook of course?" I asked my friend. "Twitter!" she replied with ...

    Jun 27, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Loom of Love

    Hallo, Dearie! =) I'm glad that you gave me the link to this. I really love this. Seriously. Like, you know that I hate flattery. The meaning is clear. This ...

    Jun 15, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: keeping time-contest entry

    Hello, Miss P. (Why am I calling you Miss P.? Well, it seems like I'm having a hard time trying to pronounce your username. LOL) I saw your wall post, ...

    Jun 15, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Booty Shorts

    Omyyyy... I found someone who could understand me. Here in Phils, it's hot, everyone knows; but it's totally unnecessary still to wear booty shorts. :lol: but those are a size ...

    Jun 15, 2011
  • Other » General, General Re: Why am I a Christian?

    Hey there, dearie. By the last couple of paragraphs, I found out that I wasn't breathing. [LOL] I know how you feel. Not everyone who was brought up in Christianity ...

    Jun 12, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Another Minute, Another Waste Of Time

    Hello, senzafine. Thanks for the request. I'm here now. First, even though you said that this is your style, the intentional small letter i for the pronoun I just wouldn't ...

    Jun 12, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Dreams Tell Lies - Prologue (new)

    Hey, Icy dear. Since you've wanted me to review Chapter eight of your novel, I went here to check out the start. Obviously, I don't think I can give you ...

    May 20, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Run, Fat Boy, Run! Part 1

    Hello, Mr. BigBadBear/Mr. Jared. Somehow I'm a bit scared of those kinds of usernames . [LOL] But anyway, that's irrelevant. Seen this piece on the front page (congrats on that) ...

    May 16, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Inspiration and Writer's Block

    Eh, these could be separated. I wanted to post them together, for some reason. They're kind of companion pieces. Inspiration strikes! I can't talk, I can't listen, I must write, ...

    May 15, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Don't Greet Me

    Hey sol hon'! :3 You're featured again! Congrats! :D OK, the first thing that got me a bit weirded out was the name calling. Not the mean name-callings, just the ...

    May 15, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: A Song

    Hey, Dearie. To get rid of the double-spaced lines, you click edit, then scroll down a bit, choose Poem, and voila! :3 Easy. Hello! How are you? What's your name? ...

    May 15, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Why?

    Hey, Amf! So, you from Nudibranch? Hehe... I don't really know what the song is about, so whatever images that flash through your head while reading will be appreciated! Verse ...

    May 15, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: A song I wrote

    Hi, dearie. Please edit your post and put For Losing You in the subject title, kay? =) I hope this fits into this section. I'm so new to this site! ...

    May 15, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Te Quiero

    Hello, WIMR! The problem I've got with the way you wrote this was, what is up with the commas? It wasn't following any standard anyway, so why bother put the ...

    May 15, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Title Totally Unrealted To The Song

    Smile pretty and hide the pain ‘Cause you’re not allowed to be down’, you say And it’s just part of your bigger game You don’t care, anyway I’m sick of ...

    May 15, 2011


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