Jashael

Hi, LRA...comments in pinkish fonts . Comparison To murder one with blade in hand To take a life precisely planned It’s not so easy with a blade Making run that ...

I am seething, the roiling bubbles overtaking the pot. My eyes filled with tears, My mouth with foul words. The paper is blank, creamy white, a relief. Blue lines crisp ...

Another old poem of mine... When you’re here I feel alive so happy to be by your side or in your arms you 're so alive so fun and free ...

To Write Love on her arms is a beautiful thing. She feels that she is wanted, That she is needed. Like she is an important factor in someone's life. The ...

This is a really old poem, not sure if I should change it or not... Rain drops there they're falling I can hear them Oh, I wish I could see ...

Hello, Charlotte! Jash here, and I'll be reviewing you today. :) Comments and nit-picks in pinkish font Love is suppose to be the best thing in the world, right? That's ...

Hello, Ray! As part of the deal, I'm here! LOL though I'm still a bit feeling sick from reading a poem (I think you know what I mean) Anyway, on ...

Boys here have lost girl's interest big time--unless she's a beyotch, like the theme character of the poem. Quite off-topic. Oh well, 'bout the poem. It's humorous how you've laid ...

I wish I could help, but I'm not very good with essays. I've never read an essay like this before, 'coz it sounded more of short story--Mark Twain? :D Anyway, ...

Comments in pinkish font! :) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ They are empty of sorrow and abandoned by truth. A cheat to the bone an

Hello, Rebelinsilence! I saw your request in Isha's thread, I know I'm not Isha, but I thought maybe I'd review you. I hope that's fine. LOL Ok, here it goes. ...

oh then could a monitor delete it for me? My bad. Don't delete it. Just contact a mod to put this in the fantasy novel section. Do you want me ...

I’ll march out of darkness with my head held high. I’ll march out of darkness with my eyes to the sky… I’ll come out of shadows and bare my scars ...

Hello, Alzora! As requested, I'll be reviewing one of your works tonight. :) Comments are in pink font. :D/ Hi, this is my first post so make sure you give ...

Hello, SilentOllie! I really liked your poem. :)) keep it up! :D I lay beneath the sky, next to the earth The sun is high in the sky, And the ...