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Jashael

Jashael

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Take Back the Lies

    Hey, Flow! Jashy here as requested. =)) I read it twice, and you know what? I really liked this. I don't have any nitpicks whatsoever. =)) My comments will be ...

    Oct 27, 2010
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: NaNoWriMo theme song.

    Hey, LadyPurple! I miss your avatar LOL Anyway, this is very nice. =)) It was done perfectly for that spontaneous, random activity. It's easy to read and it's just--fun! XD ...

    Oct 26, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Forgotten *Irony Piece, only suppose to be one page long*

    Hey, Dotsy! Here for a review. =)) care , ” Daniel said, his tone annoyed. Daniel , I already told you Abigail, thank you for doing your project. and Y ...

    Oct 26, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Till Death Do Us Apart-Chapter 1

    Hi, Blue and Shubs! I am here again as requested by Shubs...Hey, Shubs. Sorry I wasn't able to post this yesterday. I had to sleep =P too tired. =)) Anyway, ...

    Oct 25, 2010
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Come With Me

    Heym Yurii! Nice, you write songs! =D/ Does this have a melody yet? =)) I'm here to review. =)) My comments will be in pinkish font. Hey everyone. This is ...

    Oct 23, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Till Death Do Us Apart-(Prologue)

    Hey, guys! =)) Blue (or water or lily) and Shubs (or Shubhi) LOL, I'm here to review as requested by Shubhi. =D/ YAY! My nitpicks and comments will be in ...

    Oct 23, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Bourreau and the Waltz Dancer - Ch. 1 OLD

    Hey, Roal! I can see that a lot of our cool YWS reviewers have given their comments on you work. So, just listen to them and pay attention to their ...

    Oct 23, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Taboo [2]

    Hi, Ate Pink! Here again to review again. I saved this chapter in my computer, and I actually read it when I was in another city. There was no internet ...

    Oct 23, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: -deleted-

    Hi, Miss Pink! YAy! I'm reading the prologue. But hey! It doesn't seem short. LOL I was thinking of Taboo's prologue. =P My comments in pink font! ____________________________________________ The Devi

    Oct 21, 2010
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: When my life was simpler

    Hello, Road! Jash here to review as requested. =) My nitpicks will be in pinkish font. That means, if you find something altered, I changed that. =) “We need a ...

    Oct 20, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Falling to Break

    Hey, SR! =) Jash here again. I'm pretty sure you already know: my comments will be in pinkish font. And agian, like many others, this is an old work... I’m ...

    Oct 20, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Anchor or take flight?

    Hey, Nicc! As requested, I am here to review your work at last! =) My comments will be in pinkish font. All the morals I have constructed, with careful guidance ...

    Oct 20, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Taboo [1]

    Okay, I hated it! I hated how the computer abruptly restarted! (gotcha *wink*) Anyway, hi, Miss Pink! I'm here to give you my review. =) I can't honestly read it ...

    Oct 19, 2010
  • Other » General, General Re: I'm Cold

    Hello again, Emmy. As always, my comments will be in pinkish font. I will strike through unnecessary words, and if you read through this again, you will notice missing punctuations ...

    Oct 19, 2010
  • Other » General, General Re: Ancient Tales Of Time

    Hey, Emmy! Jash here to review as requested. My comments will be in pinkish font. The trees of the forests are old, their bark brown and rotting. I could If ...

    Oct 19, 2010


You wanna be a writer? You don't know how or when? Find a quiet place, use a humble pen.
— Paul Simon