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I envy you so much. I mean whenever I read Harry Potter or Speak or the Hunger Games, I could always reassure myself that they were older,had more experience and ...

I loved this! I read chappie one and also loved it but was feeling rather selfish and didn't want to review...please forgive my selfishness :( ANYWAY, Ms. Eloise? I just ...

Hey..it's me again! I am like dying right now for the journal entry. Your transitions aren't choppy or blunt at all, unlike mine in my stupid English teachers mind (grrr)...sorry ...

Hey! I really liked this. There isn't much to say about grammar because I'm to lazy to check that out :p I'll let one of those grammatical obsessie's do that. ...

I liked this poem alot! Good job, only problem I found was the last two lines Is having free will as good as we think,Or is it only to make ...

Hey, I liked this. You are very descriptive and that's a good thing but don't go overboard. You wouldn't want to read about every piece of hair on a character's ...

I have to say I really like this. It was very well-written and moving. It reminded me of a book I had read...can't quite remember the name now though. You ...

I like the idea but grammar and spacing needs alot of work. I hate doing the grammar fixing thing, soI'll leave that to someone else :) But I like the ...

I liked this but not loved it. People critisize me for having short poems so I'm cool with the shortness. I just don't like the last line. It's pretty blunt ...

hey, I liked your plot. Alot. It seemed to be a good idea so far. What I must say was that it went to fast. I got very confused when ...

I really liked this poem! You shouldn't be so hard on yourself. The only thing I didn't like was the name, it somehow reminded me of that Cartoon network show, ...

I have to say....WOW.....I am shocked at how amazing this is. I only just understood the whole story thing, well at least I think I did. I had originally written ...

or living out those painful last seconds of your life. And believe me; they will be painful. You shouldn't have put painful twice, it seems akward. I’m not your average ...

Well it was okay. I like the idea but you didnt get into it at all, we don't even know if the main character if male or female! When the ...

Too much onomatopoeia (sp?). I liked the impact of it but if you could explain because what it seemed like was someone comparing their heartbeat then dying. It was in ...