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  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Grandma Climbed a Tree and Refused to Come Down

    I saw the title and HAD to check this out. I thought it was a fairly good poem, there was an inconsistent rhyme pattern but a consistent meter which was ...

    Feb 12, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Ode

    hey there, First of all welcome to YWS!! Awww. I definetly liked this. I thought it was just another blah love story thingy but it ended up about cancer! I ...

    Feb 11, 2010
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: (E&iC) Exams & The difficulties of bananas

    haha. I really did laugh when I saw the SAT thing. At first I was wondering what in gods world a Geecesee could be than I saw SAT and I'm ...

    Feb 11, 2010
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: (E&iC) The Art of Math & Ladybird Eating

    AHAHAHA!! sorry for all caps but that was really funny *wipes tears from eyes* I don't really know how to review this. I love how some people don't notice the ...

    Feb 11, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Let Me Love You

    heya, I'm here to review! Characters Isabelle- I'm sorry but thanks to her name I don't like her. Nothing personal, it's just that I have this snob in my class ...

    Feb 11, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: When the Sky Bleeds Prologue (paranormal romance/action)

    hey there, I am here for the requested review on the Will Review for Food forum. Characters Phil Connors- He seemed to be the average joe right out of college ...

    Feb 11, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Assassin's Redemption

    Hey there, I'm here for the requested review in Will Review for Food. “ You got lucky there, Master. It won’t happen again.” There is an extra space after the ...

    Feb 11, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Nature of Man: Envy

    Ooooo! Nice! I'll give you your 1000+ word review after the contest is over, because this contest I assume is the 7 Sins contest which is being held by me. ...

    Feb 8, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Shepherd's Lamb (working title) Prologue

    MA! I HATE YOU!! For two simple reasons: 1. You are such a better horror writer than me, gosh I'm like a dollar store and your a Walmart. Gosh. Gosh. ...

    Feb 8, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Lithium chapter 1: Confusion

    urg...I hate vampire stories!! Kill the vampire part and make her dad a mermaid or pirate or something more original and I'll love it again. I like the witch thing. ...

    Feb 8, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Three Friends

    Hey, I hope I'm not offending you if you meant this to be some serious non-humorous type of thing cause it was really funny! I think that you should have ...

    Feb 8, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Lithium Preface

    Hey. This was good but short enough that I can't really say much about it. I liked that you explained a lot in small hints. It was good but I ...

    Feb 8, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Icefire - part 1

    Ooolala! Very nice! You've got the medival talking thing down pat so no problem with that. I like your haracters and the seeming lack of a king, go feminists! :) ...

    Feb 8, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: ~~Star~~

    Hey, Well this was certainly interesting. I've heard of stories like this before but the throwing of the stapler made me laugh. I wonder why he needs a wife and ...

    Feb 7, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Syrus part 1

    Hey there! I normally don't review Romantic stuff, Twilight ruined romance for me and I was always not really into love and stuff. But this, well this was a perfect ...

    Feb 7, 2010


I took a deep breath and listened to the old brag of my heart; I am, I am, I am.
— Sylvia Plath