JaneThermopolis

I really enjoyed this poem. You were right, it's a little depressing, but I found it to be moving. I liked how you described the girl's sort of relationship(?) with ...

Isn't it ironic that I was listening to the Fearless album when reading this? When I got to the end, I went back to track 1 which is actually 'Fearless'. ...

I'm not really going to review this, but I definitely really liked this poem. It's original, and I like how you didn't structure it around any rhymes or rhythms. The ...

I actually liked this a lot! A couple nitpicks though: Was it a bad idea to meet you there, That day that was fair When I saw you walking down ...

I also enjoyed this poem and thought this was well written. However, I have one nitpick: As I walk through this house of shadows; I feel terror in the air. ...

Liked this. In my opinion, it was better than Chapter 2 but I really did enjoy Chapter 1 a lot more. I liked the scene where the girl is at ...

I actually really loved how you wrote this. I think everyone, even guys, deal with self esteem issues when they see their bodies, but everyone is beautiful. Anyway I didn't ...

I really really like this! A LOT! (Also clicked the like button by the way). Not only were you creative about the wording of the poem, but you arranged the ...

This seems interesting, but like the first review said, I'm not really itching for more. I actually kind of wish you had posted more of this journal entry! I'm going ...

Interesting, poem Kingolions! I, like you, tend to write sadder poems, so I realized what you had to go through to write this. I liked how you tried to rhyme ...

I really enjoyed this poem, and like KAH said, I think we can all relate to it. I like the double meaning you have within this poem, relating bullies to ...

Good story! Btw, I clicked the like button and I advise all of the people reading this review to click the like button too. Anyways, I don't know if you ...

Hi Karina, Thanks for commenting on my work! Now, I believe this was a good start, however, I wouldn't say that this is something that could be published. Throughout the ...

The Best Books I've Ever Read: :smt005 1. Jellicoe Road by Melina Marchetta (I read this in a whole day without stopping for bathroom breaks. That's how good this book ...

Funny parody, coming from a pretty big Paramore fan! Cute and accurate about the books! I quoted my favorite verse because I can just imagine if the fictional Harry sang ...