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Jadefox

  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: The Porcelain Doll

    Thank you so much, I really needed somebody to just sit down and tell me what the dealio is with my poetry. Creative writing is more of my strong point ...

    Mar 20, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Dependendum

    Thanks! I'd thought I would explain the formatting because I've gotten a couple questions on it. For English we were assigned to read random poems and then write another that ...

    Mar 4, 2013
  • Short Story » General, Romantic Re: Walking her Home

    Thanks! I'll be sure to correct a couple of mistakes, including the bolding. It wasn't supposed to be, but while I was submitting the story it kept getting messed up ...

    Feb 2, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Desolate: Prologue-Chapter Two

    Thanks!

    Nov 9, 2012
  • Short Story » General, General Re: It

    Bye the way, I forgot to mention: Welcome to Young Writer's Society!

    Nov 4, 2012
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Supernatural Re: Reflection

    Hey there! Thanks for your input. I created the "stalker" character because it is sort of a stalker/a normal person. Okay, that's a confusing way to put it. Specifically tried ...

    Nov 4, 2012
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Supernatural Re: Reflection

    Thank you! I was unsure if the ending made sense...

    Nov 4, 2012
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: When They Come

    Thanks! I'm sure you'll be able to, just write everyday and any idea you have write it down. Even the novel I'm writing Desolate, is based on a dream I ...

    Nov 2, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Desolate: Prologue-Chapter Two

    Okay, I don't know why the description didn't insert when I submitted this. Anyways. I've posted this before, but each chapter was separate and you couldn't find the next chapter ...

    Nov 2, 2012
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: When They Come

    Thanks a lot for reviewing! The ending I know was a little.....eh. For English class on Halloween, we had to write a story using one of the three story starter ...

    Nov 2, 2012
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Without You

    Sep 7, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Desolate: Chapter One

    No, I didn't take them off. They should be pretty far back in the posts. I posted them on like September 1st and 2nd. They're there! I'll post this on ...

    Sep 7, 2012
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: sleepless

    I couldn't have put it any better.

    Sep 7, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Desolate: Prologue

    Thanks please review the rest!

    Sep 4, 2012
  • Poetry » General, General Re: for a season

    Hi, This poem kind of reminds me of my brother. I know, I know! You're talking about a Jane, but my brother likes to do his own thing and doesn't ...

    Sep 3, 2012


“A good book isn't written, it's rewritten.”
— Phyllis A. Whitney, Guide to Fiction Writing