JacobMoor

Hi! Just here to give a review, and I wanted to say that I really liked this poem! The bloody handwriting bit at the end is perfect, by the way, ...

Hi, Magebird! Jacob here, just thought I'd give this work a quick review. Sorry, I haven't had the chance to read all of the preceding stuff, so I'm a little ...

Hey Blackthorne! Really liked the story! Dark fantasy's one of my favourite genres, and it's a great way to take a breather from the usual horror tropes. You're descriptions are ...

Hey, Pandoradoomer! Just thought I'd leave a review to return the favour for my poem. Hopefully it helps you out! I've gotta say, you have a really smooth way of ...

Hey, Reillehn! This is great! I read Jabberwocky when I was younger, and I always liked the poem - doing a prose version of it is a really awesome idea. ...

Okay, this is awesome. I loved the story. It really grabbed my attention, and the writing had an amazing flow to it. It had a mysterious quality to it, and ...

Hi! Really enjoyed the story, it's short but it's also deep. It's good writing, and it has a nice flow to it. I liked the way you use the hallucination ...

Hey there! Jacob here, with a review for ya. I liked your work - it's well-written, and it has a good flow to it. There weren't many mistakes I picked ...

Hi aeternum! This is a great story - it's suspenseful, and has a cool plot. Getting some serious October Faction vibes from it. You write some pretty good dialogue, too! ...

Hey, Jesse! This is a great introduction you've got going. Its a good hook - and I like the way you've described the aristocrats, with the reeking perfume etc. Though ...

Hi, BellaLandriev! Cool story, I like the way you've written this. It's ominous, and chilling. You've left the details vague, which definitely succeeds in adding to the creepy factor. You ...

Hey Hanuli. I like the story, it's great fun to read! The humour adds a nice balance to it. I think adding some more description of the scenes might be ...

Hey tgham99! As a horror fan, I've gotta say this is awesome. Love the way you've written this. It's short, sweet, and creepy - great ending, too. You might want ...

Hi, Shallowhouse! This is really fun to read! Just went through the first few chapters, I like the concept. Good story you've got going here. I think it has a ...

Hi ryleigha! Love the story. Your descriptions are very captivating - you've done a great job balancing it with plot development. Sometimes people go overboard on description (I'm definitely guilty ...