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this is TOTALLY helping my team tortoise plan, not gonna lie XD PLUS I'M EXCITED BECAUSE THINGS ARE PICKING UP!! Wait why do they only have half an hour?! That ...

Omg things are going waaay too smoothly for them. This is too easY SOMETHING WILL GO WRONG. It was a pretty slow chapter, and I feel like some dialogue could ...

Yaaaaay!! I'm so happy to see normal Felistia again. In fact, she seems completely energized now after seeing her brother. I'm so fascinated by her family! We've already heard about ...

SO MUCH HAS HAPPENED HERE OH MY GOD how could i have put this off for so looooooong Okay, first of all your queen is freaking awesome. She is powerful, ...

Chapter 7 The name Glooper is fantastic omg. Bahahahaha I love that she's trying to make the doctor crack a smile. A fun way to juggle personalities here to keep ...

Omg Erson is insane. I love all the goofy little antics you gave him in this segment. It felt appropriately hilarious and, eventually, uncomfortable. The balance was spot on! My ...

Chapter 4 I already love her voice. It's just dripping with confident female. btw I'm calling her ESSIE 'cause 35513 kinda looks like ESSIE. I feel like she already contradicted ...

LOL Enoch's whirlwind of emotions. Now he's just shouting at her which is totally an Enoch thing to do hahahaha Enoch and Ember really complement each other well honestly. AND ...

Hello!! I'm back! :D I'll give my thoughts on each chapter than some final thoughts at the end. Chapter 1 I found it hilarious but interesting that a thirty-year-old guy ...

Hi, Ubera! I saw you had some chapters in the green room and thought it best if I started reading from the beginning. :D I really enjoyed this introduction's theme. ...

Hi, Dossereana! So sorry for stopping by a little late, but I was happy to see you've posted a piece close to your heart. One and a half years is ...

I AM BACK SOONER THAN I THOUGHT. I am inclined to disagree with the idea that Zoltar can sneak out better than Felistia, but I do that knowing you've most ...

HOW I HAVE MISSED THESE DRAGONS I love that Zoltar shows a TON of concern for Felistia. It's definitely much needed after the rocky start in their relationship for this ...

This was so cute! I think this makes for a very clean end to the chapter honestly. Dracula's character really shines in this segment, beautifully complementing Friedrich's character in the ...

The opening line about Dracula's grasp on time was just phenomenal. XD 100% perfect. Another nugget you smoothly work into your narrative. AND DRACULA'S SASS ABOUT KNOWING GERMAN.