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  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Stains of Red

    Hey, Carbon! Sorry this is later than I said it would be. School got in the way that night, and then I decided that Review Day was coming up. So ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Alexandra Chapter 1 (Revised!)

    Hello, Kathy! I like the idea behind this story. Mermaids are so cool. I tried writing a mermaid story once, but it failed miserably. XD Hopefully, you'll have better luck! ...

    Apr 11, 2011
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: The Effect

    Hi! Sorry this is later than I said it would be. I fell sick this last weekend, and I never produced enough energy to read anything. But I'm feeling better ...

    Apr 11, 2011
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: At Dark Forest Gates

    Hi, Stori! Told you I'd review this! :D D'aww. This was absolutely sweet! These scenes can be sooo sweet when written in just the right way. I think you pulled ...

    Apr 8, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Vu(way of understanding)

    Hello! Sorry about the wait! I wanted to get a few things done quick, and then I was also in panic mode due to the scary wasp friend here. But ...

    Apr 8, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Just Fishing

    Hi, Jessa! I saw your plea for a review (I think in the Feed?), and had this pulled up as a reminder. So hi! This was extremely cute. The last ...

    Apr 8, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Clostrophorical: Emeth Snip-it

    Doe! So I totally had this pulled up since your blog. I got distracted with school stuff though, so I kinda forgot about this. Fortunately, I finished a bunch of ...

    Apr 8, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Lady Judy

    Hi again! So I didn't realize that this was a prologue. I probably should've read this first. D: It definitely filled in some blanks, and I can make clearer some ...

    Apr 6, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Balema - Re-write

    Hi, Durrie! Yaaay! Some good ol' fashioned fantasy. I love fantasy. Almost any fantasy story can please me. And yours is no exception! It certainly sounds like something I'd keep ...

    Apr 6, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Lady Judy Chapter One

    Hi there! Thought I'd stop by and leave some feedback. :D So I got super excited with this one. One reason is that it was in Germany (woo!), but also, ...

    Apr 5, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Mike

    Hi, Teddy! So this was adorable. Sad but also adorable. I don't think I could stand losing a brother like Carrie did. It would ache my heart so badly. And ...

    Apr 5, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Tightrope

    Heya, Idra! This was pretty cool, I thought! I enjoyed writing these kinds of poems way back whenever. The poems with a metaphor through the whole thing. They're considered fairly ...

    Mar 27, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: whimsy

    Hi! I am here as requested in an attempt to say something helpful. :D The imagery was pretty! (And it wasn't just the mention of rainbows, though that is an ...

    Mar 27, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Prologue 2

    Hello again! You will be my 650th review (and my newest blue star) so I'm freaking excited! :D So my review in the last prologue can also apply here. However, ...

    Mar 27, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Prologue 1

    Hi, fullmetal! (This makes me think of Fullmetal Alchemist. woot!) There's not much to this prologue. D: Maybe if I read part 2, it'll make a little more sense. (Consider ...

    Mar 27, 2011


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