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Re: Stains of Red
Hey, Carbon! Sorry this is later than I said it would be. School got in the way that night, and then I decided that Review Day was coming up. So ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Alexandra Chapter 1 (Revised!)
Hello, Kathy! I like the idea behind this story. Mermaids are so cool. I tried writing a mermaid story once, but it failed miserably. XD Hopefully, you'll have better luck! ...
Apr 11, 2011 -
Re: The Effect
Hi! Sorry this is later than I said it would be. I fell sick this last weekend, and I never produced enough energy to read anything. But I'm feeling better ...
Apr 11, 2011 -
Re: At Dark Forest Gates
Hi, Stori! Told you I'd review this! :D D'aww. This was absolutely sweet! These scenes can be sooo sweet when written in just the right way. I think you pulled ...
Apr 8, 2011 -
Re: Vu(way of understanding)
Hello! Sorry about the wait! I wanted to get a few things done quick, and then I was also in panic mode due to the scary wasp friend here. But ...
Apr 8, 2011 -
Re: Just Fishing
Hi, Jessa! I saw your plea for a review (I think in the Feed?), and had this pulled up as a reminder. So hi! This was extremely cute. The last ...
Apr 8, 2011 -
Re: Clostrophorical: Emeth Snip-it
Doe! So I totally had this pulled up since your blog. I got distracted with school stuff though, so I kinda forgot about this. Fortunately, I finished a bunch of ...
Apr 8, 2011 -
Re: Lady Judy
Hi again! So I didn't realize that this was a prologue. I probably should've read this first. D: It definitely filled in some blanks, and I can make clearer some ...
Apr 6, 2011 -
Re: Balema - Re-write
Hi, Durrie! Yaaay! Some good ol' fashioned fantasy. I love fantasy. Almost any fantasy story can please me. And yours is no exception! It certainly sounds like something I'd keep ...
Apr 6, 2011 -
Re: Lady Judy Chapter One
Hi there! Thought I'd stop by and leave some feedback. :D So I got super excited with this one. One reason is that it was in Germany (woo!), but also, ...
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: Mike
Hi, Teddy! So this was adorable. Sad but also adorable. I don't think I could stand losing a brother like Carrie did. It would ache my heart so badly. And ...
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: Tightrope
Heya, Idra! This was pretty cool, I thought! I enjoyed writing these kinds of poems way back whenever. The poems with a metaphor through the whole thing. They're considered fairly ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: whimsy
Hi! I am here as requested in an attempt to say something helpful. :D The imagery was pretty! (And it wasn't just the mention of rainbows, though that is an ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: Prologue 2
Hello again! You will be my 650th review (and my newest blue star) so I'm freaking excited! :D So my review in the last prologue can also apply here. However, ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: Prologue 1
Hi, fullmetal! (This makes me think of Fullmetal Alchemist. woot!) There's not much to this prologue. D: Maybe if I read part 2, it'll make a little more sense. (Consider ...
Mar 27, 2011
