JabberHut

Heh, I liked it. The beginning paragraph bothered me when you kept repeated the structure, "Before...but now..." I don't know if you meant to do this, if this is just ...

Hey, Linds! I saw this and I jsut had to read it. Just point out a couple things. Forgive me if I repeat anything. Kill me later if I'm rude. ...

although every second that passed in solitary silence felt do damn wasted This confused me. Try reading it allowed. "Do" may just have to be deleted. you loose all sense ...

I like this! New identities, and lots of shtuff going on! Just a few pointers I'd like to make: She’s a slicer Could you explain what a slicer does? Eol’s ...

Hey, DW! I was just looking through and found this one. You're lacking reviews! Sid did cover some good points though. Let's see what I come up with... *reads* The ...

I found this story rather interesting. It certainly caught my attention. (You're the author of Hunter Garrett! I just had to read this!) But, on a serious note, this is ...

Very nice, Sleuthchick! ShadowTwit already covered a lot of the grammar issues. I'll just make a few pointers: "Blakleigh, no one would believe that a petite and shy girl would ...

Hello, I do believe we've met in the Chat, but I can't be too certain. In an operating theater illuminated by fluorescent lighting, emergency room surgeons frantically compressed the chest ...

Very well done! I really like this story--'tis going along very well! :D I sigh, frustrated, and sit on my knees, wiping the wet dirt on my now dingy gown ...

This is really amazing, Clau! It certainly made my day. I found this section still very amusing. The Pat Buchanen comment was priceless. XD Again his eyebrow raised, “Why-double you-ess?” ...

I liked this one. I was feeling a bit sane and somber myself, so I easily stuck with this story. Very well written. I never knew pure dialogue could do ...

Wonderful story! I thought you did an excellent job. I only spotted a couple grammar issues. I also don't know exactly what kind of accent you're looking for, but I ...

'Tis my friend, Badger! Howdy-doo! O_O i never said that before...anyway, I shall critique, though it's 8 in the morning. we'll see what happens :wink: The acidic water made his ...

I much liked it, Clau, very nice rythem set, indeed. (i have trouble spelling that rythem word. grr...) Anyway, I told you before, Clau: Cannibalism is bad for your health; ...

lol, I loved that story! It was so cute, it made me laugh, especially the beginning couple paragraphs. One day a long time ago, in a galaxy far, far, away, ...