JabberHut

*sigh* I'm finally here to crit. Sorry, but i had soooo much work to do. But now I can sit and do something enjoyable for a change. *begins to read* ...

You say it sucks, but I say it's pretty good. You show imagry, it's quick and painless to read. You set out the basic idea pretty easily. Then again, I'm ...

Hey! Came to crit, but I'm critting and I'm going on 25 hours without sleep. :D Just bear with me. ^^ Wordlessly, the man sat joined Kemal at the table ...

Hello! I'm back to crit your second part. ^_^ *begins to read* Crescent View High school was the most segregate school on the planet; racially and socially . "Segregate" should ...

Hey! I'm finally on so I'd be happy to crit for ya! ^^ They sat down on the soft, plastoid-cushioned seats VERY good jog with the description. You say you ...

I'm here!!! Omg, I finished my homework and have enough time for some crit! Yes! I sooo wanted to read this! Anyway, time to read! Yay! *begins to read* He ...

Heya! You probably don't know me (or maybe you do *shrug*) but I noticed this and thought I would crit! ^^ *begins to read* I had friends, I had a ...

Hey! I'll come back to read more 'cause I have to do, but I do have one suggestion/comment about the French. “Ampèreheure ! POUSSE ! POUSSE ! POUSSE ! Non, ...

Ah, I finally have time to crit. ^^ *begins to read* “Same thing, in my book. No comma should be in this sentence. ^^ Her wrath would be like the ...

Hey, came to read part 2! I thought it was pretty good. One line could use some review: And Kwest and Cere headed off toward Galeon, their new life, little ...

Hello! Looked like you needed a few reviews! ^^ "You okay?" you asked scared for the answer Comma after "asked" and a period at the end. "Charlotte's Web" you said ...

Hey, 'tis Jabber! I don't know if you know me, but now you do! :D Thought you'd want another crit of encouragement! ^^ It was actually pretty good. Right away, ...

Ooh, the first one to crit. How exciting! *begins to read* “You've got five seconds before before your wife dies. Oops! ^^ and most of all he hated that children ...

This was wonderful, Kylan! It was certainly realistic, the characters introduced very well. Amazing comparisons too: metaphors, similes, etc. Excellent! I spotted a few grammar mistakes, but the other

Hello! You don't know me, but I was just browsing for pieces to crit and found yours critless! :o That can't be! *starts to read* leaving the Bathroom as immaculate ...