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Re: Willing Sacrifice
It was no silly excuse for a poem. It was great :) I picked up that it was about a couple and the only way to save him was for ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Sincerely, Brain
Love it... LOve it... LOVe it... LOVE it... LOVE It... LOVE IT! It was brill. I think it is quiet humorouss but realistic at the same time. I really loved ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Liar Liar (1)
I loved this one too! It was truely brilliant. I loved the bit where the character had to quickly react so the mother never got too angry :) Keep writing- ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: The Art of Dying
I loved it all. I am new to writing so I am not that good at reviewing yet so I am just going to give you praise. It was excelent. ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Rejection
Hey, this was probably one of the most beautiful things I have ever read. You have practically summed up my feelings and emotions over the past 2 weeks. I am ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: can you hear me?
Hey, I really liked this. Short but sweet. I liked best the part where it said how the laughter turns to silence. It's the bit I can picture the most ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Impudence
Hey, I thought this was brill. It took me a couple of reads to understand it but it was probably just me. Maybe the language was just too much for ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Pull the Trigger
Hi, I think this was so beautiful. I could feel the saddness and the hurt that this must have inspired. I think the wording was brilliant. But, the only thing ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: My Addiction
All I can think to say is... WOW! It's so true, it's scary! I could really relate to these emotions in the character's head. Love can be such a crazy ...
Apr 29, 2011 -
Re: Happy Birthday, Teenager
Hey, I loved this. It is something, as a new teen, I can easily relate to. I could just picture it in my head. Keep writing JJxVoodo Also I am ...
Apr 29, 2011
