JC

Oh, no. That's not what I meant. I meant, where's the keys sounded a little weird, and could flow better if you mixed the sentece up a little bit. Where ...

*blushes* Thanks Alainna =D

Thanks for your suggestion, I'll be sure to fix that =D

Tis okay, I was just making sure that I understood you. I like your icon by the way =D PM me when you post the next section! -JC

Did you mean this was the end? Because if so it was rather abrupt...and made me feel stupid because I didn't quite get it. Sometimes you have to just slap ...

I was actually thinking about adding more description later...but if I did, I still wouldn't be able to post it here. I mean, most people here don't want to read ...

Yeah, Vivi was…. You should take out the period at the end of the ...(still don't know what it's called...anyone wanna fill me in?) It's just a weird rule thing. ...

hehe, you're welcome!

hehe, comma, coma, what can I say? =D hehe, I'll try to think of something for you Liz =D

Wow. Thanks tremendously, *can't help smiling* I don't know how many times I've said this, but I really appreciate all of the help, and critiques, and such. Just, thank you. ...

I think it's that I used however twice, I fixed it earlier, just not here yet...hehe =D Thanks for reading Alainna, I really appreciate it! -JC

Wow...that's really abstract...which is not saying I didn't like it, but I didn't fully understand it...hehe. It was really well written! =D Good job! -JC

Thanks again for reading it! If you ever want me to read something of yours just tell me. :) -JC

Yeah, were should be was, who's should be whose, and loose should be lose....the result of typing quickely =D Thanks for pointing those out, I'll fix them! Once agian, thanks ...

hehe, thank you Miya, I really appreciate you reading all of these =D hehe, you spelled her name Jaimy =D it makes me giggle that our characters have the same ...