JC

hehe, I saw it at 11:40 last night, and was up until like, 2:30! So ooo! I just did! hehe. It's like, two midnight showings in a row!...only the first ...

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Well, this was a kind of spur of the moment thing I thought of. I'm fairly certain that's all there is going to be of it, but I might decide ...

Lacey- that was the end...I have to finish the book I'm writing, but when I do that, I might continue this or something. Depends. By the way, Welcome.

That's good, but you should include some colors at least, just so that the reader knows they should be invisioning it. Or something.

I don't have much to critique here, other than that the part where she was at home seemed a little rushed. Other than that, it was really good. I'm gonna ...

I wish I understood anything about poetry...seeing as I don't though... yeah...I don't get it...sounds sad.

Well, pretty fast I guess. Got kinda bored. Part three is up now...so...yeah....

thanks...it's just to pass the time while I sort out I don't mind if it's cliche. =D

Jamie's not obsessed with coldstone, just tired of IHOP...hehe. But yeah...Ask your dad about 350 z's...mmmm

Have you ever seen that car?? look it up. It's amazing. Anyways, Tammy's only allowed back because she had been Jamie's lawyer for the months preceeding the trial. So, yeah, ...

laughing at him , not with him I gotta go, I'm in math right now, and shouldn't be on the comp....oh well! Must. Eat. Food. -JC

lawers times two= super lawyers. hehe.

Great as usual. I thought it was just a little bit random though. And I thought it was kind-of wierd for Jaimy to think that Luke was in love with ...

I think it was more like April 5th. There's a lot more to it now though...like 68 pages so far (they're all posted if you'd like to read =D) Thanks ...