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hehe, thanks Shadow! Honestly I'm kinda relived that the chapters will be somewhat normal now too! hehe. Once again, thanks for reading! -JC

I actually noticed the whole teen drama thing as well. I'm going to tone down the rest of the story to what I absolutely need =D Thanks. -JC

Yeah, it's just a move. But to a different city and a different school. Which for band people is a huge deal. More about that will be added later =D ...

Thanks to those of you who read part one. Here's part two. (this is still chapter one.) I held the soda in my mouth, letting it’s cold fizziness burn my ...

You finally posted! Yay! Sorry if I can't give a really in depth critique of thig, it's too good. How old is Lyla again? Anyways, good job! Keep it up! ...

--"find out what happened" just as a technical bitch, u s'pose happens would fit better? just cos' like, when you've read it, it happened, but if u haven't read it ...

yay! Uh...and uh, about narrow, please put the different chapters in different makes it easier to differentiate between posts. -JC

I started this chapter off as the verdict, but when I got to theend of this I realized it was complete enough in itself. =D. Thanks for reading! -JC

hehe, okay. I'll be sure to tell everybody when I post the verdict, seeing as it's a big thing. Or is it??? OHH! The suspense! hehe. I'm actually almost done ...

well, that just goes to show you that people don't always grade on quality as much as concept eh? I'm glad your real english teacher wasn't a complete idiot =D ...

One, I meant hand. Just think about it eh? Guy. Computer. Hand. "me time" to put it bluntly. And uh...snails can't move backwards. Basically she was saying that Jenny had ...

hehe. Yup, my shortest chapter yet! I should be done with the verdict tonight, so =D!!!

This was good, what genre would you place it in?

Finish: hehe, I finally got the time to finish this =D! Okay, so...here we go. Four more hours until he got home Technically if he lives in the white house ...

aha. I like this, though I can only judge by the style and use of description/other fancy things. You did well, though only time can tell when the real story ...