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Re: Is This My Doing?
Ahhh hello I am Izzy (you know this) and I'm bad at reviews! (you don't know this yet) First of all, good job! I really wish I had an ounce ...
Nov 10, 2017 -
Re: The Lonely Sunflower
Hello! Izzy here for a review! I really like the way this started. The sentence starts simple, leads you into the story and continues to flow in a great way. ...
Nov 10, 2017 -
Re: A desperate actress.
Hello! Izzy here for a review! I am not that great at poetry reviews but I love doing them! So here we go! The first few lines really got me, ...
Nov 7, 2017 -
Re: Tick
Hello Izzy here for a review! The clock makes me think of the time we have but also the time we don't have, what we do when we die and ...
Nov 7, 2017 -
Re: do you
This is great, honestly, I have to say that first... I noticed you missed a few commas and periods but I feel like it made it better. This makes me ...
Nov 6, 2017 -
Re: Hot Cocoa
Well dang this is me, Whosabell, with a review! /// I love this poem because it's truthful and full of childhood. The writing style was smooth and compelling. The things ...
Jan 16, 2017 -
Re: red marks
Self harm is never a good thing. I struggle with it and I know so many other people do too. The whole part with the belt is confusing too... maybe ...
Jan 9, 2017 -
Re: Ashes
Hi Whosabell here with a review! I love your style of writing and the way it kind of flows. You have the kind of writing style i would kill for. ...
Dec 9, 2016 -
Re: Friends
Jesus this reminds me of old Twenty One Pilot lyrics. Damn son. Thats good. I just want to say that I think that this is amazing and the story you ...
Dec 7, 2016 -
Re: I doubt it
Ah boy. So I don't know if you wrote this, someone else did, or it's a song. But it's still good. To me it seems like this person is part ...
Nov 11, 2016 -
Re: I'll turn you into nothing
Now I understand what this is! This turned out great. I hate guessing what poetry is about but I will try. To me this is a symbol of something that ...
Nov 11, 2016 -
Re: Insecurity
This was very good, I have seen these before but this was something that related to everyone, and every problem. I don't have any errors to correct but I really ...
Nov 11, 2016 -
Re: Bestfriends
Heya it's Whosabell with her very first review! I'm no rookie though. So, very first of all CAPITALIZE YOUR I's! And secondly I love this. You have some very raw ...
Nov 11, 2016
