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I thank you for spotting that error but I happen to like my poem the way it is. And to me it's not boring because I know the way I ...

Thank you. Well the way I wrote it was like a letter. And after I write something I hardly like to change it so I don't see me changing it ...

your welcome. :) it's good to know i helped someone. i was also teased when i was younger, on my first day at a new school in a new state. ...

thank you :) i didn't catch those errors until you said something.

well, that's how i felt that day. i'm a little better now i'm out of school haha

awesome, i really love this story. :)

Well it needs to be finished so I can read it before I leave. This is an awesome story!

This is good

Thank you for that. I would have edited it last night but I got annoyed with trying to do it on my iPod and I couldn't get the computer from ...

Yea I know it's not my best work. I wrote this at 12 am because I couldn't sleep haha.

I thank you for the spelling points. But this poem is not suppose to reveal what MY pain is. I made it like that so it can apply to anyone ...

Well the last part was you and the first part was for the people who picked on me on my first day of school ever here. And thank you :)

good poem. I can tell you have talent, too bad this is your only poem i wanted to read more. but anyways i liked it good job.

thats true

Thank you. I live in a very 'Christian' city and there is this one boy at my school who is a jahovas witness and they make fun of him for ...