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Re: Tryal's Curse 22.2
Hello, Ivywater here for a review. Oh god, this was amazing. One of the best stories I've read so far. There are so few flaws here, this review is probably ...
Apr 3, 2016 -
Re: Prologue and Chapter 1
Hello ofmonstersandmen1234 (love that username), Ivywater here to review your work for review day. Wow, this was an amazing chapter. It was extremely immersive and, honestly, left me with a ...
Apr 3, 2016 -
Re: 4 In the city they will say you don't know till it hits ya
Hello Lorelie, Ivywater here to review your story for review day. Team Ochre Orchids for the win Anyways, I really loved your story. Barbara Bitch is probably the best name ...
Apr 3, 2016 -
Re: inside the whale
Hello, Ivywater here to review your poem! (Yes, last review until my second star! This has nothing to do with the review, so just ignore it.) Anyways, this was a ...
Mar 29, 2016 -
Re: Old Dogs and New Tricks
Hello, Ivy here to review your short story. I don't have much to say, or to change. I can say that, even though I'm not married, I can somewhat relate ...
Mar 29, 2016 -
Re: In Pursuit of Inspiration: Chapter 1
Hello, Ivy here to review you work. I love novellas, I love how they're written out, I love how long they are and at the same time how short, and ...
Mar 29, 2016 -
Re: Sailing the Storm
Hello Destinywriter27, Ivy here to review your work. This is a very...interesting piece of poetry. What was your inspiration for writing this? Did it randomly pop into your mind (like ...
Mar 29, 2016 -
Re: How We Made The World Just A Little Bit Nicer - Uncontrollable, Episode 8
Hello, Ivywater here to bring your chapter out of the dreaded Green Room! This was a very interesting chapter and just as FeatherPen said below me, you might want to ...
Mar 29, 2016 -
Re: The Pilgrim- Chapter One
Hello, Ivywater here to review your chapter, along with the review trade deal. Let me start with saying this was a very interesting and captivating way to start off the ...
Mar 24, 2016 -
Re: Every object tells a story!
Ivywater here to attempt to write a review :) I know I just told you I can't really write a review for this because I can't find much to change...but ...
Mar 24, 2016 -
Re: Heartlines - Prologue
Hey, Ivywater here for a review! It's been a bit sine I've reviewed chapters so let's hope I'm not too rusty. I would like to ask where did you get ...
Mar 23, 2016 -
Re: Alternate: Prologue
Hello Wolfsbane, Ivywater here. I really like how simple you kept the prologue. It didn't reveal much about the story, but enough to give the reader a good idea about ...
Mar 17, 2016 -
Re: Brown Eyes
Hello, Ivywater here for another review. Let me just start of saying... "It short of seems like of love poem to me..." Anyways on to the REAL review. This was ...
Mar 17, 2016 -
Re: reaching to kiss the sun
Oh my god, that was one of the most beautiful thing I've every read. It's so descriptive and wonderful... words can't express. Here I am attempting to write a review ...
Mar 17, 2016 -
Re: Frame of Mind [Sugar Sweet Tears #7]
Wow, that was amazing. I was going to try and write a review...but there is nothing here that would change..... my favorite part/parts: The picture of her life was perfect. ...
Mar 17, 2016
