User avatar

Isaac

  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Runner

    Heyo. So I really liked this, I liked the meaning behind it, and I liked the inspiration for it. I'm not terribly good at reviewing poetry, and this is different ...

    Sep 20, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Vote For Someone

    I love it! Best of all three I've looked at! I bet a lot of people can identify with this. Now, for the actual review. Nothing actually caught my eye ...

    Sep 19, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Lost

    Hello, its me again. So, I liked this one. There was just one thing that I noticed interrupted the flow a bit. I’m no longer a pure person, I'm not ...

    Sep 19, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: She will never know.

    Heyo, its Isaac. So, I liked the basic idea of this piece. But I don't think it was long enough. There was also a sort of issue logic wise. I ...

    Sep 19, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Lost in Thought

    Hey, its Isaac. I'm not too proficient with poetry myself, but I'll give it a shot. I really liked the idea behind this, or, lack thereof, since it was just ...

    Sep 19, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Untitled Excerpt--rough draft

    Hey its Isaac. I'll try and help you out here. I saw that you had a question about the info dump sorta thing. Welcome to YWS by the way!!!! Anyways...now ...

    Aug 30, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: evangelical evangelists have eaten all our food again.

    HAHA! This is amazing! One of the best things I have seen on YWS. Its different, but I absolutely love your style. Someone once said to me that nothing can ...

    Aug 27, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Dust

    I like this, you get a really good feel for who this person was, and what their life was like. You manage to get across a story for this person. ...

    Aug 22, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Kisses

    Interesting, I like the symbolism that you used. I also like how you didn't make the person seem like they were just ranting about how their life sucked. A major ...

    Aug 19, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Ghosts

    So, I'm not yet sure what I think. It'll probably become clear as I write this review ;) Firstly, I can't quite tell if you want to make it creepy, ...

    Jul 29, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I'm Being

    Hey, so I really like this poem. It has a very nice, mysterious flow. The rhyming is subtle, the whole poem is very...sensual. I like how you used purled by ...

    Jul 29, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: O Smoke and Mirrors

    Hey, so I'll make this fast. No nit picks, I'll leave that to someone else. One thing I noticed was that although you had really good rhyming going on for ...

    Jul 28, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Taboo [1]

    Hey Pink! So I don't really like being too nit picky. So I'll stick to the general stuff. Pretty good description. If you could mix in Lucas' general description with ...

    Jul 28, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Balance: Lydia Rain

    Hey, so overall I like it. Just one quick thing to point out. I would help with grammar, but that's not really my forte. So, the one thing. I noticed ...

    Jul 27, 2010
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: All Forms of a Road

    Heyo, I'll be your reviewer today, tonight, whatever :P So, I like it, its different. Its an idea that I haven't seen before in a poem. So, I give thumbs ...

    Jul 27, 2010


"Storybooks and roleplays are just for fun!" To which I say: of course! But why only "just"? Sometimes fun is found in the full-send. Sometimes fun is found in taking it seriously, and aiming to do it with excellence!
— soundofmind