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Re: The Runner
Heyo. So I really liked this, I liked the meaning behind it, and I liked the inspiration for it. I'm not terribly good at reviewing poetry, and this is different ...
Sep 20, 2010 -
Re: Vote For Someone
I love it! Best of all three I've looked at! I bet a lot of people can identify with this. Now, for the actual review. Nothing actually caught my eye ...
Sep 19, 2010 -
Re: Lost
Hello, its me again. So, I liked this one. There was just one thing that I noticed interrupted the flow a bit. I’m no longer a pure person, I'm not ...
Sep 19, 2010 -
Re: She will never know.
Heyo, its Isaac. So, I liked the basic idea of this piece. But I don't think it was long enough. There was also a sort of issue logic wise. I ...
Sep 19, 2010 -
Re: Lost in Thought
Hey, its Isaac. I'm not too proficient with poetry myself, but I'll give it a shot. I really liked the idea behind this, or, lack thereof, since it was just ...
Sep 19, 2010 -
Re: Untitled Excerpt--rough draft
Hey its Isaac. I'll try and help you out here. I saw that you had a question about the info dump sorta thing. Welcome to YWS by the way!!!! Anyways...now ...
Aug 30, 2010 -
Re: evangelical evangelists have eaten all our food again.
HAHA! This is amazing! One of the best things I have seen on YWS. Its different, but I absolutely love your style. Someone once said to me that nothing can ...
Aug 27, 2010 -
Re: Dust
I like this, you get a really good feel for who this person was, and what their life was like. You manage to get across a story for this person. ...
Aug 22, 2010 -
Re: Kisses
Interesting, I like the symbolism that you used. I also like how you didn't make the person seem like they were just ranting about how their life sucked. A major ...
Aug 19, 2010 -
Re: Ghosts
So, I'm not yet sure what I think. It'll probably become clear as I write this review ;) Firstly, I can't quite tell if you want to make it creepy, ...
Jul 29, 2010 -
Re: I'm Being
Hey, so I really like this poem. It has a very nice, mysterious flow. The rhyming is subtle, the whole poem is very...sensual. I like how you used purled by ...
Jul 29, 2010 -
Re: O Smoke and Mirrors
Hey, so I'll make this fast. No nit picks, I'll leave that to someone else. One thing I noticed was that although you had really good rhyming going on for ...
Jul 28, 2010 -
Re: Taboo [1]
Hey Pink! So I don't really like being too nit picky. So I'll stick to the general stuff. Pretty good description. If you could mix in Lucas' general description with ...
Jul 28, 2010 -
Re: The Balance: Lydia Rain
Hey, so overall I like it. Just one quick thing to point out. I would help with grammar, but that's not really my forte. So, the one thing. I noticed ...
Jul 27, 2010 -
Re: All Forms of a Road
Heyo, I'll be your reviewer today, tonight, whatever :P So, I like it, its different. Its an idea that I haven't seen before in a poem. So, I give thumbs ...
Jul 27, 2010
