Young Writers Society

Hello, IsProcrastinator here for the review! Interesting start! I liked how you jump right into action, and provide information about the characters through their dialogues. You did a great job ...

Hello, IsProcrastinator here for the review! this was totally unexpected! Now it leaves me with a lot of questions. How was that a child was inside the terrifying monster? Do ...

Hello, IsProcrastinator here for the review! First of all, nice opening sentence! Hooks the reader right in. You did an amazing job describing the unique setting and it gives a ...

Hello, IsProcrastinator here for the review! The opening paragraph establishes a vivid picture of the seaside, which pulled me right in. The descriptions portray a pleasant scene, but at the ...

Hello, IsProcrastinator here for the review! First of all, lemme just say, you have an amazing writing style. The way you weave the humourous elements into your writing so effortlessly ...

Hello, IsProcrastinator here for the review! First of all, nice opening sentence :) they must have bumped heads real hard. First, all I see is black. Then, stars. Then, her. ...

Hello, IsProcrastinator here for the review! First of all, wow! I loved it. The way Kila is described, sitting alone, working on her scrapbook, making a timeline of her time ...

Hello, IsProcrastinator here for the review! Ok, so first of all I absolutely loved how you mentioned the change of point of view : Ok, so if you’re a little ...

Hello, IsProcrastinator here for the review! The opening paragraph is well written, and pulled me right in. However, before I get to the content, I'll start by addressing some typos ...

Hi there! First of all, I would like to say the description was spot on here. The picture of eternal despair and agony was vivid, and so were the sufferings ...

Hey there! Well, so within its short expanse, the story does a really good job dealing with the narrator's existential crisis. At the beginning I thought the narrator is a ...

Well, I think this is the beginning of an awesome romance. I don't usually read much romance, but I totally wanna read more of this! Kate's sense of humor is ...

Well, this was a really good short story! The way it's written reminds me of the children's stories with a moral lesson we used to read as kids. I like ...

Wow, this is the beginning of an awesome story! I love how you begin the story, the opening sentence was unique as well as humorous. The world building is fascinating, ...

Well, this is the beginning of an interesting story, I can tell. It makes me want to know more about the world of the TV show where Cynthia finds herself. ...